机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子结构，注意时态和主谓一致，避免冗余。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine. After a busy day, my family has many clothes to wash, so it helps us save time and reduces housework.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，表达不够流畅，建议使用更准确的词汇和正确的语法结构，避免重复表达。

範例: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time, allowing us to focus on other activities instead of spending too much time on housework.

建議: 回答中语法错误明显，表达不清晰，句子断裂，建议学习正确的句子结构和词汇搭配，确保表达完整连贯。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions when I buy a new electrical machine. This helps me understand all the functions and use it correctly, which is very important.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，注意句子连贯和逻辑性。

範例: I think it depends on how complex the machine is. For simple machines with basic functions, it's easy to figure out how to use them. But for machines with advanced features, reading the instructions is necessary to understand all functions.

× I like the washing machine as each day after a busy walk we family had many clothes need to be washed and it is convenient for us to avoid the concentrate on too much housework.

✓ I like the washing machine as each day after a busy walk, our family has many clothes that need to be washed, and it is convenient for us to avoid concentrating on too much housework.

原句中“we family had many clothes need to be washed”存在复数和单数形式错误，应为“our family has many clothes that need to be washed”，因为“family”作为整体是单数，且“clothes”后需加定语从句“that need to be washed”。此外，“avoid the concentrate”应改为“avoid concentrating”，避免使用错误的名词形式。

× I do believe they are crucial for today's people's life, as with them's help we could save more time to do our own things rather than concentrate the efforts and the time on too many housework.

✓ I do believe they are crucial for today's people's lives, as with their help we can save more time to do our own things rather than concentrate our efforts and time on too much housework.

“people's life”应为复数“people's lives”，因为指的是多人的生活；“with them's help”错误，应为“with their help”；“concentrate the efforts and the time”缺少所有格，应为“concentrate our efforts and time”；“too many housework”错误，housework是不可数名词，应为“too much housework”。

× I do believe they are crucial for today's people's life, as with them's help we could save more time to do our own things rather than concentrate the efforts and the time on too many housework.

✓ I do believe they are crucial for today's people's lives, as with their help we can save more time to do our own things rather than concentrate our efforts and time on too much housework.

“them's”是错误的所有格形式，正确的应该是“their”，表示“他们的”。

× Yes I do. Whenever I bought a new electrical machine, I have to read the instrument to make sure each function and each buttons.

✓ Yes, I do. Whenever I buy a new electrical machine, I have to read the instructions to make sure of each function and each button.

“bought”是过去式，但句意表达的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“buy”；“instrument”应为“instructions”，表示说明书；“each buttons”中“each”后应接单数名词，改为“each button”。

× Yes I do. Whenever I bought a new electrical machine, I have to read the instrument to make sure each function and each buttons. Usage it.

✓ Yes, I do. Whenever I buy a new electrical machine, I have to read the instructions to make sure of each function and each button. Use it properly.

“make sure each function”缺少介词“of”，应为“make sure of each function”；“Usage it”用法错误，应为“Use it properly”或“Use it correctly”。

× It is crucial and benefit for my usage.

✓ It is crucial and beneficial for my use.

“benefit”是名词，句中应使用形容词“beneficial”来修饰“for my use”。

× It depends on the complexity of this electrical machine. If it is a basic function with common B button usage, you can easily get how can it work.

✓ It depends on the complexity of this electrical machine. If it has basic functions with common B button usage, you can easily understand how it works.

“If it is a basic function”应改为“if it has basic functions”，因为机器有功能；“get how can it work”语序错误，应为“understand how it works”。

× But if it is equipped with further functions, we need to read the instructions to make sure at each function.

✓ But if it is equipped with additional functions, we need to read the instructions to understand each function.

“make sure at each function”用法错误，应改为“understand each function”或“make sure of each function”。