机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇，比如将“clean the float”改为“clean the floor”。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean my clothes quickly, saving me time to do other things I enjoy.

建議: 回答中有较多语气词和重复，影响流畅度。建议减少填充词，使用连词使句子更连贯，并具体说明原因。

範例: Yes, washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important, especially in homes with children and pets, because they help keep the house clean quickly and efficiently.

建議: 语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议注意时态和句子结构，避免重复词汇，并用更准确的表达说明原因。

範例: Usually, I read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me operate it correctly and avoid damaging it.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议使用正确的动词形式和复数形式，并简洁明了地表达观点。

範例: Yes, I believe reading the instructions is essential because they explain how the machines work and how to use them properly to prevent damage.

× Usually I will read the instruction before I using it, uh, because read the instruction help me to use the machine correctly and avoid some uh, possible, uh, possible uh, MMM risk that broken the machine.

✓ Usually I will read the instruction before I use it, uh, because reading the instruction helps me to use the machine correctly and avoid some possible risks that could break the machine.

这里“before I using it”中，动词“use”应使用原形，因为“before”后面接动词原形；“read the instruction help me”中，主语是“reading the instruction”，应使用动名词形式“reading”，且动词“help”应加第三人称单数形式“helps”；“possible uh, MMM risk that broken the machine”中，“risk”应为复数“risks”，且“broken”应改为“could break”表示可能导致机器损坏。建议注意动词形式和主谓一致。

× Yes, I think it is essential to read the instruction before operate a machines because the instructions uh, indicate that the machines functions and using steps in case you, uh, damage the machine.

✓ Yes, I think it is essential to read the instructions before operating a machine because the instructions indicate the machine's functions and usage steps in case you damage the machine.

“instruction”应为复数“instructions”，因为通常说明书是多条；“before operate a machines”中，“operate”应使用动名词“operating”，且“a machines”应为单数“a machine”；“the machines functions”应为“the machine's functions”，表示所有格；“using steps”应改为“usage steps”。建议注意名词单复数和动词形式。

× Yes, I think it is essential to read the instruction before operate a machines because the instructions uh, indicate that the machines functions and using steps in case you, uh, damage the machine.

✓ Yes, I think it is essential to read the instructions before operating a machine because the instructions indicate the machine's functions and usage steps in case you damage the machine.

“before operate”应使用动名词形式“before operating”，因为介词后应接动名词。

× Well, that definitely should be, uh, cleaning, cleaning and laundry machine. You know, it can do it can help me clean the float and wash my clothes. It's a lot of time for me to do another work I like.

✓ Well, that definitely should be, uh, the cleaning and laundry machine. You know, it can help me clean the floor and wash my clothes. It saves me a lot of time to do other work I like.

“cleaning, cleaning and laundry machine”重复且缺少冠词，应为“the cleaning and laundry machine”；“clean the float”中“float”应为“floor”；“It's a lot of time”应改为“It saves me a lot of time”；“another work”应为“other work”，因为“work”是不可数名词。建议注意冠词使用、单词拼写和不可数名词搭配。

× Definitely, uh, washing machine and uh, vacuum cleaner play a crucial role in, uh, in home course, uh, especially there's children and pets.

✓ Definitely, uh, washing machines and uh, vacuum cleaners play a crucial role in, uh, home chores, uh, especially when there are children and pets.

“washing machine and vacuum cleaner”应使用复数形式“washing machines and vacuum cleaners”，因为指的是一般情况；“in home course”应为“in home chores”；“there's children”应为“there are children”，因为“children”是复数。建议注意名词单复数和固定搭配。