机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. For example, specify the size of your room correctly and avoid awkward phrasing like 'helps me in such thing.' Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: My favorite machine at home is the vacuum cleaner. I currently live in my university dormitory, and my room is about 14 to 15 square meters. To keep it clean, I often use the vacuum cleaner because it makes cleaning quick and easy.

建議: Your answer is good but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating words like 'really very.' Try to add a concluding sentence to summarize your opinion.

範例: I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are essential in our daily lives because they save time and effort. For instance, washing machines clean clothes much faster than hand washing. Moreover, I have a sweeping machine at my hometown, which helps keep the house clean quickly and efficiently. Overall, these machines greatly improve our quality of life.

建議: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid redundancy. For example, clarify what you mean by 'keep up the boxes where the money machines were taking out.' Use linking words to connect your points logically.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any machine. I also keep the boxes and manuals in case I need to refer to them later. I find the instructions helpful for the first time using the machine and useful if any problems occur.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'they should be.'

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using a machine for the first time. This helps prevent mistakes, such as incorrect software installation or updates. Instructions are written to guide users and ensure the machine works properly.

× My favorite machine in my home is vacuum cleaner.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the vacuum cleaner.

The noun 'vacuum cleaner' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific item known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' here is incorrect.

× I'm currently live in the dormitory of my university and I have a room of 1415 square meters and to maintain a cleanliness in my room I prefer to use my vacuum cleaner that helps me in such thing.

✓ I'm currently living in the dormitory of my university and I have a room of 14 to 15 square meters. To maintain cleanliness in my room, I prefer to use my vacuum cleaner that helps me with such things.

The verb 'live' should be in the present continuous form 'living' to indicate an ongoing action. Also, 'a cleanliness' is incorrect because 'cleanliness' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article. The phrase 'helps me in such thing' is awkward; 'helps me with such things' is more natural.

× I have a room of 1415 square meters

✓ I have a room of 14 to 15 square meters

The original phrase '1415 square meters' is ambiguous and likely a typo. It should be '14 to 15 square meters' to indicate the approximate size. Also, 'a room of 14 to 15 square meters' is acceptable, but specifying the range with 'to' is clearer.

× I try to keep up the boxes where the money machines were taking out.

✓ I try to keep the boxes where the money machines were taken out.

The phrase 'money machines' is unclear and likely a mistranslation or misuse. Possibly 'money machines' refers to 'money machines' or 'money machines' is incorrect. Also, 'were taking out' is incorrect passive voice; it should be 'were taken out'. The phrase 'keep up the boxes' is awkward; 'keep the boxes' is better.

× I believe that instructions they were written for users and they should be.

✓ I believe that instructions are written for users and they should be followed.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'were written' and ends abruptly. Since instructions are generally written for users, present tense 'are written' is more appropriate. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'followed' completes the thought.