机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้องและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้คำกริยาและโครงสร้างประโยคให้เหมาะสม รวมถึงเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและเชื่อมโยงกันอย่างมีเหตุผล

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because I enjoy doing my laundry myself. I find that my clothes feel cleaner when I wash them at home compared to sending them to a laundry service.

建議: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำเชื่อมและโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้อง รวมถึงการใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและชัดเจน เช่น การใช้คำว่า 'sweeping machine' แทน 'swapping machine' และอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because doing these tasks by hand takes much longer. Therefore, using machines is really useful as they save a lot of time.

建議: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และการเชื่อมประโยคให้สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงการใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและหลีกเลี่ยงการซ้ำซ้อน เช่น การใช้ 'instructions' ในรูปพหูพจน์และการจัดเรียงประโยคให้ชัดเจน

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it ensures safety and provides step-by-step guidance. I believe everyone should read the manual before using any machine.

建議: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และชัดเจน รวมถึงการใช้คำศัพท์และโครงสร้างประโยคที่เหมาะสมเพื่อสื่อความหมายอย่างมีประสิทธิภาพ

範例: Absolutely, it is very important to read the instructions before using a machine or doing any task because the step-by-step guidance helps me understand how to do it correctly and safely.

× I really like to watching my clothes by myself because it feel clean more than send to laundry company.

✓ I really like watching my clothes by myself because it feels cleaner than sending them to the laundry company.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'watching' not 'to watching'. Also, 'feel' should be 'feels' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Clean' should be 'cleaner' to compare properly, and 'send' should be 'sending' as a gerund after 'than'. Additionally, 'them' is needed as the object of 'sending'.

× because it feel clean more than send to laundry company.

✓ because it feels cleaner than sending them to the laundry company.

The verb 'feel' must be in third person singular form 'feels' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× I really like to watching my clothes by myself because it feel clean more than send to laundry company.

✓ I really like watching my clothes by myself because it feels cleaner than sending them to the laundry company.

The noun 'clothes' is plural and needs a plural verb or pronoun agreement. Also, 'laundry company' should be preceded by 'the' to specify the company.

× Yes, I think washing machine and swapping machine is are important because of if used by hand is take time too long longer than use the machine.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because if used by hand, they take too much time compared to using the machines.

The nouns 'washing machine' and 'sweeping machine' should be plural to match the context. The verb 'is are' is incorrect; it should be 'are' to agree with plural subject. Also, 'swapping' is a typo for 'sweeping'. 'Is take' is incorrect; it should be 'they take'. 'Too long longer' is redundant; 'too much time' or 'longer' is sufficient.

× Yes, I think washing machine and swapping machine is are important because of if used by hand is take time too long longer than use the machine.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because if used by hand, they take too much time compared to using the machines.

The phrase 'because of if used by hand' is incorrect; 'because if used by hand' or 'because when used by hand' is better. Also, 'than use the machine' should be 'compared to using the machines' for correct preposition and gerund use.

× That's why the machine is really useful and save time.

✓ That's why the machine is really useful and saves time.

The verb 'save' should be 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'machine'.

× Yes, I always read instruction before using machine because of for safety and shows step by step how to use and for safety.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it is for safety and shows step by step how to use it.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple steps. 'Using machine' needs an article 'a machine'. 'Because of for safety' is redundant; 'because it is for safety' is correct. 'Shows' needs a subject; 'it shows' is clearer.

× We should. I think should everyone should read instruction or handbook before use machine?

✓ I think everyone should read the instructions or handbook before using a machine.

The sentence is fragmented and has incorrect word order. 'We should.' is incomplete. 'I think should everyone should' is incorrect; correct order is 'I think everyone should'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Before use machine' should be 'before using a machine'.

× Yes, I always read instruction before using machine because of for safety and shows step by step how to use and for safety.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it is for safety and shows step by step how to use it.

The pronoun 'it' is needed to refer to 'instructions' or 'machine' to clarify the subject of 'shows'.

× Yes, I always read instruction before using machine because of for safety and shows step by step how to use and for safety.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it is for safety and shows step by step how to use it.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'instructions' and the indefinite article 'a' before 'machine'.

× Absolutely it really important to read the instruction before I use the machine or before do something, because step by step is good to good to know and if I.

✓ Absolutely, it is really important to read the instructions before I use the machine or before doing something, because step by step instructions are good to know.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' with the definite article 'the'. 'Before do something' should be 'before doing something'. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished or rephrased for clarity.