机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as 'I almost use it everyday' and 'I do not have to bother when using it and I can'. Also, clarify what 'Rasuka' is for the listener. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the rice cooker because I use it almost every day. It makes cooking rice very easy and saves me a lot of time since I don't have to watch it while it cooks.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by using clearer linking words and more precise vocabulary. For example, instead of 'I think it's easy to do', specify why you prefer not to use the sweeping machine. Also, avoid repeating 'machine' unnecessarily.

範例: I think the importance of washing and sweeping machines depends on personal lifestyle. For me, the washing machine is essential because it saves time, but I prefer sweeping by hand since I find it easy and more thorough.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'haven't used it haven't used before'. Also, use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas more smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions when using a new machine because it helps me operate it safely and correctly. However, if I have used the machine before, I usually don't read the instructions again.

建議: Your answer is clear and well-structured but could be improved by correcting minor grammatical errors and using more precise vocabulary. For example, say 'instructions' instead of 'instruction' and 'operate the machine in the most efficient way'.

範例: Yes, definitely. I believe reading the instructions before using any machine is important because it ensures your safety and the safety of those around you. Additionally, it helps you operate the machine in the most efficient way.

× There are several machines in my home, but Rasuka is my favorite one because I almost use it everyday.

✓ There are several machines in my home, but Rasuka is my favourite one because I almost use it every day.

The word 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace' or 'ordinary', but here the adverbial phrase 'every day' (two words) is needed to indicate frequency. Also, 'favorite' should be 'favourite' in Australian English spelling.

× It's really easy to cook rice and it saves a lot of time to me because I do not have to bother when using it and I can.

✓ It's really easy to cook rice and it saves me a lot of time because I do not have to bother when using it and I can.

The phrase 'saves a lot of time to me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'saves me a lot of time'. The indirect object 'me' should come before the direct object 'a lot of time'.

× I believe it depends on the personal preference and the lifestyle because some people might think it's a waste of money and energy as well.

✓ I believe it depends on personal preference and lifestyle because some people might think it's a waste of money and energy as well.

The use of 'the' before 'personal preference' and 'lifestyle' is unnecessary here because these are general concepts. Also, 'preference' and 'lifestyle' are uncountable or general nouns in this context, so no article is needed.

× But for me, washing machine is a really important machine and I do not prefer using the sweeping machine as I think it's easy to do.

✓ But for me, the washing machine is a really important machine and I do not prefer using the sweeping machine as I think it's easy to do.

When referring to a specific type of machine generally, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'washing machine'. Also, 'sweeping machine' is less common; 'vacuum cleaner' or 'broom' might be better, but this is not a grammar issue.

× Yes, if it's a new machine which I haven't used it haven't used before, I will definitely go through the instructions.

✓ Yes, if it's a new machine which I haven't used before, I will definitely go through the instructions.

The pronoun 'it' is redundant after 'which I haven't used'. The relative clause 'which I haven't used before' already includes the subject, so 'it' should be omitted.

× So I am confident enough to use that machine safely and properly.

✓ So I am confident enough to use that machine safely and properly.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× However, if I have used it beforehand, I will not go through the instructions much.

✓ However, if I have used it beforehand, I will not go through the instructions much.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× Yes, definitely. I think it's really important to go through the instruction before operating any machine mainly because it ensures your safety and the safety of your surrounding as well.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think it's really important to go through the instructions before operating any machine mainly because it ensures your safety and the safety of your surroundings as well.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. Also, 'surrounding' should be plural 'surroundings' to refer to the environment around you.

× In addition, it's really helpful so that you can operate the machine it's most efficient way.

✓ In addition, it's really helpful so that you can operate the machine in its most efficient way.

The sentence is missing the preposition 'in' before 'its most efficient way' and the possessive pronoun 'its' is needed instead of 'it's' (which means 'it is'). This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.