机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific details about why the washing machine is helpful.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. Moreover, it not only washes but also dries clothes, which helps me complete my chores quickly and focus on other important tasks like studying or cooking.

建議: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use proper grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent. Provide specific examples or reasons to support your opinion.

範例: Yes, I definitely think washing and sweeping machines are essential in every household. They save a lot of time and effort, allowing us to focus on other important tasks. For instance, using a washing machine prevents hand fatigue from washing clothes manually.

建議: Good direct answer but try to reduce filler words and improve sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more concise.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions whenever I buy a new machine and after it is installed. This helps me avoid injuries and prevents damaging the machine due to mistakes.

建議: Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear references. Use correct pronouns and provide a complete example with linking words to explain your point clearly.

範例: Yes, it is very important to read instructions before using any new machine because without proper guidance, we might hurt ourselves or damage the machine. For example, when I recently bought a big iron, I carefully read the instructions to use it safely and securely.

× Uh, my favorite machine in my home is washing machine, uh, because it saves a lot of time and effort.

✓ Uh, my favorite machine in my home is the washing machine, uh, because it saves a lot of time and effort.

The noun 'washing machine' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific item known to both speaker and listener.

× It's not only washes clothes, but also dries them, which makes, uh, my work easier and I can focus on other important tasks.

✓ It not only washes clothes, but also dries them, which makes, uh, my work easier and I can focus on other important tasks.

The phrase 'not only' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'it's'. Using 'It's not only washes' is incorrect; it should be 'It not only washes' to maintain proper sentence structure.

× I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are an, uh, essential part of our household because they reduces a lot of effort and time and which we can use in other important, uh, task and washing machines also, uh, saves my hand from being.

✓ I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are an, uh, essential part of our household because they reduce a lot of effort and time which we can use in other important, uh, tasks and washing machines also, uh, save my hands from being tired.

The subject 'they' is plural, so the verb should be 'reduce' not 'reduces'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. Additionally, 'washing machines' is plural and should be followed by 'save' not 'saves'. The phrase 'saves my hand from being' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'save my hands from being tired' for clarity.

× Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions before using any new machine because without proper guidance we can hurt themselves and can damage the machine also.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions before using any new machine because without proper guidance we can hurt ourselves and can damage the machine also.

The pronoun 'themselves' is incorrect here because the subject is 'we', so the reflexive pronoun should be 'ourselves' to agree with the subject.