机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Faut que tu fasses ton réponse plus naturelle pis claire. Essaie d'utiliser des phrases plus courtes pis évite les répétitions. Par exemple, au lieu de dire "I liked it because it saves my time to wash dishes" pis "I work everyday so I don't have enough time to manage to wash dishes", tu pourrais combiner ces idées pour être plus efficace.

範例: My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher because it saves me a lot of time. Since I work every day, I don't have enough time to wash dishes by hand, so this machine helps me a lot.

建議: Faut que tu fasses attention à la grammaire pis à la fluidité. Par exemple, "both of them are plays" est incorrect. Aussi, essaie d'ajouter des mots de liaison pour rendre ta réponse plus cohérente.

範例: Definitely, I believe both washing machines and sweeping machines play an important role in daily life because everyone is busy with work. Therefore, these machines help save time and effort.

建議: Faut que tu évites les répétitions comme "the the" pis que tu utilises des mots plus précis. Aussi, "playing with the machine" n'est pas naturel en anglais. Essaie d'utiliser "using the machine" ou "operating the machine".

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any appliance. I think it's important for safety, especially when using a machine for the first time.

建議: Faut que tu corriges les erreurs comme "the the" pis que tu utilises des expressions plus naturelles. Par exemple, "It is certain to read" n'est pas correct. Tu pourrais dire "It is important to read".

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions before using any new machine because it helps you understand how to use it quickly and ensures your safety.

× I liked it because it saves my time to wash dishes.

✓ I like it because it saves me time washing dishes.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'liked' when the context is about a current preference. Also, 'saves my time to wash dishes' is awkward; it should be 'saves me time washing dishes' to express the idea naturally.

× I work everyday so I don't have enough time to manage to wash dishes, so that's why I like this machine a lot.

✓ I work every day, so I don't have enough time to wash dishes; that's why I like this machine a lot.

The phrase 'manage to wash dishes' is unnecessary and awkward here. Also, 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb). The sentence is improved by removing 'manage to' and correcting 'everyday' to 'every day'.

× Definitely, I believe that both of them are plays an important role in your daily life.

✓ Definitely, I believe that both of them play an important role in your daily life.

The verb 'plays' does not agree with the plural subject 'both of them'. The correct verb form is 'play' to match the plural subject.

× These days everyone is busy in work life to save time and efforts.

✓ These days, everyone is busy with work life to save time and effort.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'busy with' is the correct phrase. Also, 'efforts' should be singular 'effort' when used in this context.

× These machines will help you to save your time.

✓ These machines will help you save time.

The phrase 'save your time' is unnatural; 'save time' is the correct expression. Also, 'help you to save' can be simplified to 'help you save'.

× Yes, I do read the the descriptions on before using any appliance.

✓ Yes, I do read the descriptions before using any appliance.

There is a repeated 'the the' which is a typographical error. Also, 'descriptions on' is incorrect; 'descriptions' alone suffices.

× I believe that we should always do that because if you are playing with the machine for the first time, for your safety you will have to be very careful before using it.

✓ I believe that we should always do that because if you are using the machine for the first time, for your safety you have to be very careful before using it.

The phrase 'playing with the machine' is informal and inappropriate here; 'using the machine' is better. Also, 'will have to be' can be simplified to 'have to be' for clarity.

× It is certain to read the instruction before you use any new machine.

✓ It is important to read the instructions before you use any new machine.

'It is certain to read' is incorrect; 'It is important to read' is the correct expression. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it usually refers to multiple steps.

× I believe that it would help you understand the the machine really quickly and it would be better for your safety.

✓ I believe that it would help you understand the machine really quickly and it would be better for your safety.

There is a repeated 'the the' which is a typographical error.