机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不夠自然。建議你直接回答問題，並用連接詞組織句子，使語句更流暢。例如，注意單複數一致和時態的正確使用。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves a lot of time compared to washing clothes by hand, which we used to do in the past.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤且句子結構重複。建議使用連接詞如"so"或"therefore"來避免重複，並注意主詞和動詞的一致性。

範例: Yes, both washing machines and sweeping machines are very important nowadays because they save us time, so we can focus on other activities instead of doing housework.

建議: 回答不夠清晰且語法錯誤較多。建議簡潔明確地表達意見，並使用正確的語法和詞彙。

範例: I usually don't read the manuals because I prefer to watch YouTube videos or ask a tutor to learn how to use the machines.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤和用詞不當。建議使用正確的時態和詞彙，並用連接詞使句子更連貫。

範例: I think it is sometimes important to read the instructions because missing a caution or step might cause you to use the machine incorrectly and damage it, which would require repairs.

× I would say definitely a laundry machines because we usually in the past we have to, we had to spend a lot of time on washing clothes by hands.

✓ I would say definitely a laundry machine because usually in the past we had to spend a lot of time washing clothes by hand.

The word 'machines' should be singular 'machine' because it refers to one favorite machine. Also, 'by hands' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'by hand' meaning using one's hands. The phrase 'we usually in the past we have to' is awkward and corrected to 'usually in the past we had to' to fit past tense and clarity.

× But after laundry machines comes up, we don't need to spend a lot of time.

✓ But after laundry machines came up, we don't need to spend a lot of time.

The phrase 'laundry machines comes up' is incorrect because 'machines' is plural and 'comes' is singular verb. It should be 'laundry machines came up' to match plural subject and past tense.

× Yes, it's both really important for nowadays because we can free to do anything we want, because we don't have to do housework, because we can just simply use washing machine or sweeping machines.

✓ Yes, both are really important nowadays because we are free to do anything we want since we don't have to do housework; we can simply use washing machines or sweeping machines.

'It's both' is incorrect; 'both are' is correct for plural subjects. 'Washing machine or sweeping machines' mixes singular and plural; both should be plural 'washing machines or sweeping machines' to be consistent. 'For nowadays' is incorrect; 'nowadays' alone is sufficient.

× I don't really read the manual or instructions for using machines because we can just check the online resources like YouTube videos or a tuition tutor helps you to like how long the machine.

✓ I don't really read the manual or instructions for using machines because we can just check online resources like YouTube videos or a tutor who helps you understand how long to use the machine.

The phrase 'a tuition tutor helps you to like how long the machine' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It is corrected to 'a tutor who helps you understand how long to use the machine' for clarity and correctness. 'The manual or instructions' is acceptable here.

× Umm, I would say sometimes because if you miss a cautions or the instructions you might fail to use the machines or you break broke them because you skip one step or and then you will have to repair the machines.

✓ Umm, I would say sometimes because if you miss a caution or the instructions, you might fail to use the machines or break them because you skip one step, and then you will have to repair the machines.

'Miss a cautions' is incorrect; 'caution' is uncountable or singular here. 'Break broke them' is redundant; only 'break' is needed. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar by removing redundancy and fixing singular/plural forms.