机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够流畅，且有重复和犹豫词汇。建议加强语法基础，避免重复表达，回答时尽量简洁明了。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because I have to wash clothes every day at school. When I get home, I like to use it to save time and effort. It really helps me a lot.

建議: 回答中有较多填充词和重复，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，减少重复，丰富词汇表达。

範例: Yes, definitely. Washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they reduce our workload and save time. Moreover, they make our daily life easier and more enjoyable.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议回答时注意句子完整，避免语法错误，并且清楚表达观点。

範例: Usually, I don't read the instructions because I like to solve problems by myself. However, if I encounter difficulties, I will read the instructions to find solutions.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，注意语法正确。

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read instructions. Although I don't like it, I read them when I have problems to find solutions.

× I hate washing clothes because I must washing clothes every day in the school.

✓ I hate washing clothes because I must wash clothes every day at school.

这里'must'后面应该接动词原形，不能接动名词'washing'。此外，'in the school'应改为'at school'，表示在学校。

× So umm, the use most useful thing for me is must the washing machine.

✓ So umm, the most useful thing for me must be the washing machine.

情态动词'must'用法错误，应该用'must be'结构表示推测。'use most useful'词序错误，应为'the most useful'。

× they can also, umm, make our life, makes our life easier, uh, and uh, increase our sense of happiness.

✓ they can also, umm, make our life easier, uh, and uh, increase our sense of happiness.

主语是复数'they'，谓语动词应使用原形'make'，不能用第三人称单数形式'makes'。

× I'm free not because I don't like reading the instructions, I instead I prefer handle the problems by myself because I think reading the instructions will limit my creativity, so I prefer to just handle it by myself.

✓ I'm not free because I don't like reading the instructions; instead, I prefer to handle the problems by myself because I think reading the instructions will limit my creativity, so I prefer to just handle it by myself.

'I'm free not'表达错误，应为'I'm not free'。此外，'prefer handle'缺少不定式to，应为'prefer to handle'。

× But if I really face the problems I.

✓ But if I really face problems, I...

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分。'the problems'改为'problems'更自然。

× Even though I don't like read the instructions, but when I face the problems I will I I still have have to go back to and read the instructions to find some solutions.

✓ Even though I don't like reading the instructions, when I face problems, I still have to go back and read the instructions to find some solutions.

'don't like read'应改为'don't like reading'，动词后接动名词。'but'与'even though'重复，去掉'but'。'have have'重复，应为'have'。'go back to and read'中'to'多余，应去掉。