机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some irrelevant or confusing information (e.g., 'I like to draw the most uh' and 'I bought a drone and a Turkey'). Try to answer the question directly by naming a specific machine and explaining why you like it. Use clear and coherent sentences, avoid redundancy, and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: My favourite machine at home is my drone. I bought it because I enjoy taking aerial photos when I travel. It allows me to capture beautiful views from above, which I then share on Instagram. Using the drone makes my trips more exciting and memorable.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases (e.g., 'St. washing machine, sleeping machine', 'I need to watch my wash clothes daily'). Try to speak clearly and use correct grammar. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in daily life. For example, I play basketball every day and sweat a lot, so I need to wash my clothes frequently. Without a washing machine, it would be difficult to keep my clothes clean and fresh.

建議: Your answer is relevant but somewhat repetitive and incomplete at the end. Try to complete your sentences fully and avoid redundancy (e.g., 'vivid and easily easy understanding'). Use linking words to connect ideas and make your answer more coherent.

範例: I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine. Instead, I prefer to watch YouTube videos because they provide clear and easy-to-understand demonstrations. This helps me learn how to use the machine more effectively.

建議: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'use machine for in bad way'). Try to use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I believe it is important to read the instructions before using a machine. Without proper guidance, people might use the machine incorrectly, which can cause problems like fires or mechanical failures. Therefore, reading instructions helps prevent accidents and ensures safe use.

× When I was in trouble, I I bought a drone and a Turkey, which is really useful for my traveling because it allows me to take photos from the air and I posted those pictures on the social media like Instagram, which is really fast excited for me because I can share the pictures.

✓ When I was in trouble, I bought a drone and a Turkey, which is really useful for my traveling because it allows me to take photos from the air and I post those pictures on social media like Instagram, which is really exciting for me because I can share the pictures.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'posted' with present context; 'posted' should be 'post' to match the ongoing action. Also, 'fast excited' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'exciting' to describe the experience. The word 'the' before 'social media' is unnecessary because 'social media' is uncountable here.

× Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

✓ Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

No correction needed here; the plural forms 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines' are correctly used to refer to multiple types of machines.

× I think St. washing machine, sleeping machine is really essential for for my daily life because without the washing machine I can't.

✓ I think washing machines and sweeping machines are really essential for my daily life because without a washing machine I can't.

The original sentence incorrectly uses singular 'washing machine, sleeping machine is' when referring to two machines; it should be plural 'washing machines and sweeping machines are'. Also, 'St.' is unclear and likely a typo. 'Sleeping machine' should be 'sweeping machine'. The phrase 'I can't' is incomplete and needs clarification, but as per instructions, only grammar issues are corrected.

× I need to wear the smelly in a dirty clothes because I usually do a sport like basketball day in my daily life so I sweat easily.

✓ I need to avoid wearing smelly and dirty clothes because I usually play sports like basketball daily, so I sweat easily.

The phrase 'wear the smelly in a dirty clothes' is grammatically incorrect. 'Smelly' and 'dirty' are adjectives describing 'clothes', so 'smelly and dirty clothes' is correct. Also, 'do a sport like basketball day in my daily life' is awkward; 'play sports like basketball daily' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× So I need to watch my wash clothes daily.

✓ So I need to wash my clothes daily.

The phrase 'watch my wash clothes' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'wash' without 'watch'. The sentence should be 'I need to wash my clothes daily' to express the habitual action.

× I don't read instructions before using machine, but I like to watch some YouTube about the instruction of the machine because YouTube provides me a lot of vivid and easily easy understanding instructions and people uh, we can understand easily more than.

✓ I don't read instructions before using a machine, but I like to watch some YouTube videos about the instructions of the machine because YouTube provides me with a lot of vivid and easily understandable instructions, and people can understand more easily than from reading.

The sentence has several issues: 'using machine' needs an article 'a machine'; 'some YouTube' should be 'some YouTube videos'; 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions'; 'easily easy understanding' is redundant and incorrect, 'easily understandable' is correct; the last part is incomplete and awkward, so it is clarified to express the intended meaning.

× I think reading the instructions really important to avoid some mistake using and without instructions.

✓ I think reading the instructions is really important to avoid some mistakes when using machines and without instructions.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'reading the instructions'. Also, 'some mistake using and without instructions' is unclear; it should be 'some mistakes when using machines without instructions'. The preposition 'when' clarifies the condition.

× Some people tend to use machine for in bad way and it causes some trouble like fire or something mechanical problem.

✓ Some people tend to use machines in a bad way, and it causes some trouble like fire or mechanical problems.

'Use machine for in bad way' is incorrect; it should be 'use machines in a bad way'. Also, 'something mechanical problem' is incorrect; 'mechanical problems' is the correct plural form. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.