机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundant phrasing and tense inconsistency (use simple past or present consistently).

範例: My favourite machine at home is my new hair dryer. Because I have long hair, it used to take me about 30 minutes to dry it, but the new dryer only takes around 10 minutes, so it saves me a lot of time.

建議: Begin with a direct opinion, then add a specific reason and an example. Use linking words (for example, therefore) and avoid repetition (e.g., don’t repeat 'washing machines'). Keep sentences varied and concise.

範例: Yes, I think they are important. For example, my washing machine and vacuum cleaner help me finish chores much faster, so I can spend that time studying or relaxing.

建議: State your habit clearly, then give a brief reason and a conditional detail. Use more natural phrasing and avoid repeating words like 'machine' and 'figure'. Keep it within two to three sentences.

範例: Usually I don’t read the instructions; I prefer to try the device myself to see how it works. If I can’t figure it out after a few tries, I’ll check the manual or look online for help.

建議: Give a clear opinion first, then explain with a reason and a brief qualification. Avoid contradictory or vague phrasing like 'you can choose whether do you want to read it or not'—make it personal and concise.

範例: Yes, it is important to read instructions because they help you use a device safely and correctly. However, I usually keep the manual and only read it if I encounter problems.

× My favorite machine at my home is my new hair dryer.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is my new hair dryer.

Use the preposition 'in' with 'home' to indicate something inside the home; 'at my home' is not idiomatic here. Change 'at' to 'in' for correct placement. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× I have long hair and I usually spend about 30 minutes to dry my hair before, but when I got the new dryer, I would spend about only 10 minutes a day to dry my hair.

✓ I have long hair and I usually used to spend about 30 minutes drying my hair before, but after I got the new dryer, I only spend about 10 minutes a day drying my hair.

Tense consistency and verb form: 'usually spend ... to dry' is incorrect; use 'used to spend' or 'usually spent' for past habit. 'To dry' should be the gerund 'drying' after 'spend'. 'When I got' implies past; use 'after I got' and present result 'I only spend' to show current habit. Also move 'only' before the time expression. Grammar Problem Type IDs: 6, 8

× I think it's very convenient.

✓ I think it's very convenient.

No grammatical error detected related to provided types; sentence is correct. (No correction needed.) Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because I have washing machines and a vacuum cleaner in my home and I will use them to clean my clothes and my rooms floor.

✓ Yes, I believe washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because I have a washing machine and a vacuum cleaner in my home and I use them to clean my clothes and my room's floor.

Plural consistency and article usage: 'washing machines and sweeping machines' is awkward; 'vacuum cleaner' is better than 'sweeping machines'. Match plurality: if you say 'washing machines' earlier, then later 'I have washing machines' is repetitive; better to specify 'a washing machine'. 'Will use' suggests future but habitual use needs present 'use'. 'my rooms floor' needs possessive 'my room's floor' or 'the floor of my room'. Grammar Problem Type IDs: 10, 22

× I think it's very convenient and I can spend more time on my personal things.

✓ I think it's very convenient and I can spend more time on my personal matters.

Word choice: 'personal things' is informal and vague; 'personal matters' or 'personal activities' is more natural. No -ing correction required here but this improves register. Grammar Problem Type ID: 8

× Actually I won't read the instructions because I like to figure how to use the machine by my own.

✓ Actually I don't read the instructions because I like to figure out how to use the machine by myself.

Wrong modal and phrasing: 'I won't read' suggests future refusal; use 'I don't read' for general habit. 'Figure how to' needs 'figure out how to'. 'by my own' is incorrect; use 'by myself' or 'on my own'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 4

× So I will try to open the machine and use the machine first.

✓ So I try to open the machine and use it first.

Tense consistency and redundancy: 'will try' implies future; for habitual action use simple present 'I try'. Avoid repeating 'the machine' — use pronoun 'it'. Grammar Problem Type IDs: 26, 27

× If I really can't figure it out, then I will read the instruction.

✓ If I really can't figure it out, then I will read the instructions.

Number and article: 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because manuals are usually plural or treat as countable; keep 'will read' for a future action triggered by inability. Grammar Problem Type ID: 4

× Yes, I think it's important to read it, but just like I just said that I'm not the person who really follows the rules.

✓ Yes, I think it's important to read them, but as I said, I'm not the kind of person who really follows the rules.

Pronoun agreement and phrasing: 'read it' should be 'read them' to match 'instructions'. 'just like I just said that' is wordy and repetitive; simplify to 'as I said'. Use 'the kind of person' for natural phrasing. Grammar Problem Type IDs: 12, 26

× So I think it's important to keep the instruction, but you can choose whether do you want to read it or not.

✓ So I think it's important to keep the instructions, but you can choose whether you want to read them or not.

Word order in indirect question: 'whether do you want' is incorrect; correct form is 'whether you want'. Also 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' and pronoun 'them' used. Grammar Problem Type IDs: 16, 11