记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and then provide specific examples using linking words to make your response more natural and effective.

範例: I think I am fairly good at memorising things. For instance, I can easily remember people's faces and important dates, which helps me in social situations.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear statement, then explain with specific examples using linking words to improve clarity and coherence.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things occasionally. However, I always make an effort to remember important people and events by keeping reminders.

建議: Your answer is vague and lacks a clear topic sentence. Try to directly answer the question and provide specific details with linking words to make your response more coherent and informative.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments and tasks. Therefore, I write notes which help me stay organized and not forget important things.

建議: Your answer is clear and includes examples, but there are minor errors and some redundancy. Try to use varied vocabulary and avoid repeating words to make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: Like many people, I rely on reminders to remember important tasks. For example, I set alarms on my phone for meetings and jot down notes for significant events, which helps me stay organized.

× I think no, but there's some time when I forgot something important.

✓ I think no, but there have been some times when I forgot something important.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'there's' (there is) which is singular and present tense, but the context requires plural and present perfect tense to indicate past occurrences. 'There have been some times' correctly expresses multiple past instances relevant to the present.

× But I always try to remember my favorite and important things, people and something what is important.

✓ But I always try to remember my favorite and important things, people, and something that is important.

The phrase 'something what is important' is incorrect; 'what' should be replaced with 'that' to correctly introduce a relative clause describing 'something'. This is a common error in relative pronoun usage.

× I think like most people, I use reminders to remember important things.

✓ I think, like most people, I use reminders to remember important things.

A comma is needed after 'I think' to separate the introductory phrase from the main clause, improving clarity. The preposition 'like' is correctly used here, but punctuation is necessary for correct sentence structure.

× For example, I set alarm set on my phone for meetings and write notes for important fee events.

✓ For example, I set alarms on my phone for meetings and write notes for important free events.

The phrase 'set alarm set' is redundant; 'set alarms' is correct. Also, 'fee events' is likely a typo for 'free events'. The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'phone'. The sentence needed correction for redundancy and spelling.