记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“sentence”和“grammars”应为复数形式且表达不够自然。建议注意语法一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

範例: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For instance, I often find it hard to quickly and accurately remember new vocabulary and grammar rules, which makes learning a language challenging for me.

建議: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“concludes”应为“contains”，“fault”应为“found”。句子结构不够流畅，建议加强词汇准确性和句子连贯性。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. Last year, I lost my phone in a public restroom and was very worried because it contained many important things. Fortunately, a kind person found it and called me. This experience taught me to be more careful.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“to taking”应为“to take”，表达不够简洁自然。建议注意动词形式和句子简洁性，避免冗长。

範例: Honestly, the most important thing I need to remember daily is to take my medicine on time because I have a serious illness. My doctor advised me to take it regularly, which is essential for my recovery.

建議: 回答中存在词汇和表达错误，如“S applications”不明确，“remind reminder alarm”重复且不自然。建议使用准确词汇，简洁表达，并注意句子连贯。

範例: I use several apps on my smartphone that serve different purposes. For example, I set reminder alarms to help me remember important tasks.

× I often struggle to remember new vocabulary words, sentence, and other grammars quickly and accurately, which makes it difficult for me to learn a language effectively.

✓ I often struggle to remember new vocabulary words, sentences, and other grammar quickly and accurately, which makes it difficult for me to learn a language effectively.

句子中“sentence”和“grammars”使用不当。应使用复数形式“sentences”，而“grammar”作为不可数名词不加复数。

× Last year I lost my phone in a public toilet and I was worried about it because my phone concludes many important things.

✓ Last year I lost my phone in a public toilet and I was worried about it because my phone contains many important things.

动词“concludes”用错，应使用“contains”表示“包含”。且时态应为一般过去时。

× Fortunately, a nice person fault it and called me.

✓ Fortunately, a nice person found it and called me.

动词“fault”用错，应为“found”表示“找到”。

× my doctor advised me to taking the medicine regularly, which is essential for my recovery, so I need to remind.

✓ my doctor advised me to take the medicine regularly, which is essential for my recovery, so I need to remind myself.

动词“advise”后应接不定式“to take”，而非“to taking”。“remind”后应加反身代词“myself”。

× To be honest, one important thing I need to remember every day is to take the medicine all time because I have a serious illness and my doctor advised me to taking the medicine regularly, which is essential for my recovery, so I need to remind.

✓ To be honest, one important thing I need to remember every day is to take the medicine all the time because I have a serious illness and my doctor advised me to take the medicine regularly, which is essential for my recovery, so I need to remind myself.

短语“all time”应为“all the time”，表示“一直”。

× I set a remind reminder alarm which can remind me about every important things.

✓ I set a reminder alarm which can remind me about every important thing.

“remind reminder”重复，改为“reminder”。“every”后应接单数名词“thing”，而非复数“things”。