记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary, for example, say 'I can remember important items in my daily life' instead of 'I could remember every important items'. Keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. I can easily remember important details in my daily life, which helps me manage my work and personal tasks effectively.

建議: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, instead of repeating 'I have a good talent for memory', say 'I have a good memory, so I rarely forget important things'. Also, check verb tenses and plural forms for accuracy.

範例: No, I rarely forget important things because I have a good memory. This skill has helped me perform efficiently at work and seize good opportunities.

建議: Make sure to use correct vocabulary and grammar, for example, 'a new startup' instead of 'a new stop', and 'an important appointment' instead of 'a important appointment'. Use linking words like 'such as' or 'for example' to list details clearly. Avoid incomplete sentences and finish your thoughts.

範例: As the CEO of a new startup, I need to remember important appointments. For example, I must recall the appointment time, the background of the people I meet, the topics we will discuss, and the overall schedule for the day.

建議: Reduce filler words to improve fluency. Use more precise vocabulary and sentence structures. For example, instead of 'I think it's very important for new startup CEO', say 'I believe it is essential for a new startup CEO'. Also, explain briefly how you use reminder apps to support your memory.

範例: Although I have a good memory, I use reminder apps to keep track of important tasks. I believe it is essential for a new startup CEO to maintain an organised schedule to run the company effectively.

× Yes, I could remember every important items and things in my daily life.

✓ Yes, I could remember every important item and thing in my daily life.

The word 'every' is followed by a singular noun, so 'items' and 'things' should be singular as 'item' and 'thing'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× So I think uh, uh, the uh, talent make me uh, live a good life and uh, uh, had a good job opportunity.

✓ So I think uh, uh, the uh, talent makes me uh, live a good life and uh, uh, have a good job opportunity.

The verb 'make' should be in third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'talent'. Also, 'had' should be 'have' to maintain present tense consistency. This involves verb form corrections.

× No, I have a good talent for memory memorizing things so I never forgot anything important in my daily life.

✓ No, I have a good talent for memorizing things so I have never forgotten anything important in my daily life.

The phrase 'never forgot' is incorrect in this context; the present perfect 'have never forgotten' is appropriate to indicate an experience up to now. Also, 'memory memorizing things' is redundant; 'memorizing things' suffices.

× This ability also provide me the good work opportunities because I'm I'm efficient for every tasks and important.

✓ This ability also provides me with good work opportunities because I'm efficient with every task and important matter.

The verb 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'ability'. 'I'm I'm' is a repetition error. 'Every tasks' should be 'every task' as 'every' requires singular noun. 'Efficient for' should be 'efficient with'. 'Important' needs a noun to complete the phrase, so 'important matter' is added.

× I'm the CEO of a new stop.

✓ I'm the CEO of a new startup.

The word 'stop' is likely a typo for 'startup'. This correction is necessary for meaning and clarity.

× The most important thing in my daily life is a important appointment.

✓ The most important thing in my daily life is an important appointment.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'important'. This is an article usage issue.

× So I need to remember the appointment time and the important persons background and what's the topic we need to talk and I think the specific schedule is also important and.

✓ So I need to remember the appointment time, the important person's background, the topic we need to discuss, and I think the specific schedule is also important.

'Persons' should be possessive singular 'person's' to indicate background belonging to one person. 'What's the topic we need to talk' is awkward; 'the topic we need to discuss' is clearer. The sentence was run-on and needed proper conjunctions and punctuation.

× This ability also provide me the good work opportunities because I'm I'm efficient for every tasks and important.

✓ This ability also provides me with good work opportunities because I'm efficient with every task and important matter.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'efficient with' is the correct collocation. Also, 'provide me the' should be 'provides me with'.