记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“tear tell”和“insurers are not”使句子难以理解。建议加强语法准确性和表达的清晰度，同时避免重复和冗余。

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget details quickly. For example, when someone tells me their telephone number, I usually write it down in an app called Notebook to avoid mistakes.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“scheduling app”前缺少冠词，“settle members”表达不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和语法结构，增强表达的逻辑性和清晰度。

範例: I have never forgotten anything important because I usually use a scheduling app on my phone. This app helps me organize my tasks and set reminders so I can prepare everything in advance and avoid missing any details.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“what to groceries to”不符合英语表达习惯。建议加强句子结构的完整性和词汇的准确使用。

範例: As a student, I need to remember the topics I have to study every day because it helps me stay organized. Also, since I am staying at home, I sometimes have to cook, so I need to remember what groceries to buy.

建議: 回答较为清晰，但存在语法错误，如“review that what I need to do”不符合语法规则。建议注意句子结构的正确性，使用连贯的表达。

範例: I usually use an app called To Do List to help me remember important tasks. Every evening, I review what I need to do the next day, and if I find something urgent or important, I make sure to write it down in the app.

× I often get details quickly.

✓ I often forget details quickly.

这里的动词get用法不当，应该用forget表示“忘记”，而不是“得到”。动词get后面接details不符合语境。

× when someone tear tell me their telephone number

✓ when someone tells me their telephone number

tear是错误的词，应为第三人称单数形式tells，表示“告诉”。

× I usually have to write down in an app called Notebook to remember it.

✓ I usually have to write it down in an app called Notebook to remember it.

write down后面缺少宾语，应该写成write it down。

× This helps me avoid mistakes and insurers are not.

✓ This helps me avoid mistakes and ensures I do not make any.

句子结构混乱，insurers用错，应为ensures，且后半句不完整，需补充完整表达。

× I usually use scheduling app on my phone.

✓ I usually use a scheduling app on my phone.

scheduling app前缺少冠词a，表示泛指一个应用。

× This app helps me organize my tasks and settle members so I can prepare everything in advance and avoid missing any details.

✓ This app helps me organize my tasks and set reminders so I can prepare everything in advance and avoid missing any details.

settle members用词错误，应为set reminders，表示“设置提醒”。

× This really helps me focused and manage my time better.

✓ This really helps me focus and manage my time better.

help后面动词用原形focus，而不是过去分词focused。

× Also, since I umm I'm staying at home, I sometimes have to cook so I need to remember what to groceries to.

✓ Also, since I'm staying at home, I sometimes have to cook so I need to remember what groceries to buy.

句子中“what to groceries to”结构错误，应为“what groceries to buy”。

× Every evening I review that what I need to do the next day and if I find something urgent or important I make sure to write down in the app.

✓ Every evening I review what I need to do the next day, and if I find something urgent or important, I make sure to write it down in the app.

句子中多余的that应去掉，write down后缺少宾语it，且逗号使用不当。