记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题并给出具体原因。

範例: No, I'm not good at memorising things because I often get distracted and forget details easily.

建議: 回答内容混乱且不连贯，缺乏具体细节，建议用完整句子描述一次忘记重要物品的经历。

範例: Yes, once during National Day, I forgot to bring my ID card, which caused me some trouble.

建議: 回答表达不流畅，语法错误较多，建议明确指出需要记住的具体事项并说明原因。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember to take my medicine because forgetting it can affect my health.

建議: 表达不清晰，词汇使用错误，建议使用正确的表达方式说明记忆方法。

範例: I often forget things, so now I write important tasks in a notebook to remind myself to complete them.

× No, I'm really not good at memory things because I'm more a terror people and I'm not good at make some friends so I always forget.

✓ No, I'm really not good at memorising things because I'm more of a timid person and I'm not good at making friends so I always forget.

这里'memory things'应改为'memorising things'，因为'memory'是名词，'memorising'是动名词，表示记忆的动作。'terror people'应为'timid person'，因为'terror'是恐怖的意思，且'people'是复数，前面用的是单数。'make some friends'应改为'making friends'，动词后应使用动名词形式。

× No, I'm really not good at memory things because I'm more a terror people and I'm not good at make some friends so I always forget.

✓ No, I'm really not good at memorising things because I'm more of a timid person and I'm not good at making friends so I always forget.

动词短语后面接动名词形式，'not good at make'应改为'not good at making'。

× The places of the things.

✓ The places of the things.

该句不完整，缺少主语和谓语，建议补充完整句子。

× Yes, of course. During the National Day. I will I have been beyond but I didn't I forgot to take my ID card so my another.

✓ Yes, of course. During the National Day, I went out but I forgot to take my ID card and my other documents.

句中时态混乱，'will I have been beyond'不合语法，应使用过去时'went out'。'didn't I forgot'错误，应该直接用过去时'forgot'。'my another'表达不清，应改为'my other documents'。

× During the National Day. I will I have been beyond but I didn't I forgot to take my ID card so my another.

✓ During the National Day, I went out but I forgot to take my ID card and my other documents.

'During the National Day'后应接逗号连接句子。'beyond'用法错误，应改为'went out'。

× Uh, I think I need to remember a lot of things, but the foremost thing is it pills.

✓ Uh, I think I need to remember a lot of things, but the foremost thing is the pills.

'it pills'用法错误，应使用定冠词'the'来特指药片。

× Umm, I often forget to eat pills so that my doctor, uh, so that my illness, uh, was not improved.

✓ Umm, I often forget to take my pills, so my doctor said my illness has not improved.

'eat pills'不合适，应该用'take pills'。'so that my doctor'句子不完整，需改为完整表达。

× I am a carrot people, so I often forget some important things.

✓ I am a forgetful person, so I often forget some important things.

'carrot people'表达错误，应使用'forgetful person'表示健忘的人。

× But nowadays I found output and take some important things to the memorandum.

✓ But nowadays I write down and take some important things as a memorandum.

'found output'表达错误，应为'write down'。'to the memorandum'应改为'as a memorandum'。

× It can remind me to finish some more things.

✓ It can remind me to finish more things.

'some more things'中'some'多余，直接用'more things'即可。