记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够完整，句子结构不够自然。建议注意完整表达观点，避免语法错误，并且用更自然的表达方式。

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially when they are interesting to me. For instance, if my friends share some gossip, I can remember the details for a long time because it captures my attention.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够准确的问题。建议注意时态一致，主谓一致，并且用更准确的词汇表达情感。

範例: Yes, I have. Once, I forgot to pick up a friend from the airport because I was very busy that day and lost track of time. It was quite embarrassing, but fortunately, my friend understood.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议注意名词复数形式和句子结构，表达时更准确和连贯。

範例: I need to remember my study tests. As a student, I have many assessments and exams to prepare for. Besides, I also have to keep track of important dates like project deadlines.

建議: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题。建议注意冠词使用，句子结构和逻辑连接，使表达更流畅。

範例: I use a to-do list and set reminders on my phone. This way, I can stay organized and keep track of everything I need to do. As a result, I rarely forget anything important.

× Yes, I'm especially when it comes to interesting things.

✓ Yes, I am especially good at it when it comes to interesting things.

句子中缺少形容词或名词来说明“especially”修饰的内容，需补充“good at it”使句子完整。

× luckily my friend understand.

✓ luckily my friend understands.

主语是单数“my friend”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“understands”。

× because I'm really busy that day and just lost track of time.

✓ because I was really busy that day and just lost track of time.

描述过去的事情，动词时态应使用过去时，“I'm”应改为“I was”。

× I have a lot assessment and exam to repeat.

✓ I have a lot of assessments and exams to repeat.

“a lot”后应加介词“of”，且“assessment”和“exam”应使用复数形式以匹配“a lot of”。

× I use A to do list and set reminders on my phone.

✓ I use a to-do list and set reminders on my phone.

“to do list”应写作复合名词“to-do list”，且冠词应为小写“a”。

× This way I can stay organized my areas for everything I need to do.

✓ This way I can stay organized in all my areas for everything I need to do.

“organized”后应加介词“in”来连接后面的名词短语，且“my areas”前应加“all”使表达更完整。