记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复填充词，表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复使用“uh”等填充词，并且注意动词形式的正确使用。

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily recall many events from my childhood as well as important information I learned at school.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构混乱，且有重复词汇。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，表达要简洁明了。

範例: Yes, I once forgot an important meeting with my friends last month. My friend came from another city to visit me, but I completely forgot about our plan.

建議: 句子中存在语法错误，表达不清晰。建议明确表达需要记住的具体内容，并使用正确的语法结构。

範例: As a university student, I need to remember the knowledge and skills I learn during my studies every day.

建議: 回答较为简单且有重复填充词，表达不够流畅。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并且具体说明记笔记和制定计划的方法。

範例: I usually take notes to record important details and make a daily schedule to organise the tasks I need to complete.

× I think I am good at memories in things

✓ I think I am good at memorising things

这里'memories'是名词复数形式，但句子中需要动名词形式'memorising'来表示记忆的动作。应使用动名词来表达擅长做某事。

× I have forgot a meeting between I and my friends

✓ I have forgotten a meeting between me and my friends

'have forgot'是不正确的完成时态形式，正确的完成时态应使用过去分词'forgotten'。此外，'between I and my friends'中'I'应改为宾格'me'。

× between I and my friends

✓ between me and my friends

'between'后面应使用宾格代词，'I'是主格，应改为宾格'me'。

× on the last month my friend came from other city and to go to my city to play with me

✓ last month my friend came from another city to my city to play with me

'on the last month'应改为'last month'，表示时间点时不加介词；'other city'应为'another city'，表示另一座城市；'and to go to my city'结构不正确，直接用不定式表达目的。

× I must to remember the technology from study in my daily life

✓ I must remember the technology from my studies in my daily life

'must'后面不加'to'，直接接动词原形；'study'应改为复数名词'studies'表示学习内容。

× I will make a schedule to play the important things I must do in a day

✓ I will make a schedule to plan the important things I must do in a day

'make a schedule to play'中的'play'用词不当，应为'plan'表示安排计划。