记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid repetition and hesitations to make your answer sound more natural. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific examples. For instance, mention the types of things you remember well and those you find difficult, using linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing faces and visual information, such as pictures or subjects in books. However, I find it harder to remember numbers or special dates, which require more effort on my part.

建議: Work on sentence structure and grammar to improve clarity. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'however' to make your answer more coherent. Also, try to be more concise and avoid unnecessary details.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot the time of my dentist appointment. However, I managed to go eventually, and everything was fine. Since then, I try hard not to forget important things.

建議: Complete your sentences fully and avoid trailing off. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about what you need to remember.

範例: As a student, I need to remember important dates for exams and assignments. Additionally, I have a busy schedule, so I must keep track of my daily tasks and lessons to stay organized.

建議: Avoid repetition and hesitations to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to explain your method step-by-step. Provide a complete and coherent explanation of your memorization technique.

範例: When I need to memorize texts, I first read them carefully and identify the main ideas. This approach helps me remember the content more easily. I usually apply this method to other types of information as well.

× I I would say I'm good at memorizing faces of people and memorizing some subjects on pictures or in some in some books I would say, but I'm not that good at memorizing numbers or some special dates.

✓ I would say I'm good at memorizing faces of people and memorizing some subjects from pictures or from some books, but I'm not that good at memorizing numbers or some special dates.

The original sentence has a repeated phrase 'in some in some' which is redundant and incorrect. Also, the preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'pictures' and 'books'; the correct preposition is 'from' when referring to information obtained from these sources. Removing redundancy and correcting prepositions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× As far I can say yes I forgot that one thing, it was when I needed to go to dentist and I forgot what time I need to go.

✓ As far as I can say, yes, I forgot one thing; it was when I needed to go to the dentist and I forgot what time I needed to go.

The phrase 'As far I can say' is missing the preposition 'as' after 'far'. Also, 'go to dentist' requires the definite article 'the' before 'dentist'. The verb tense in 'I forgot what time I need to go' should be past tense 'needed' to maintain consistency with the past event. These corrections ensure proper prepositional use, article usage, and tense agreement.

× So I really trying not to forget anything important for me.

✓ So I am really trying not to forget anything important to me.

The original sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' needed for the present continuous tense 'I am trying'. Also, the preposition 'for' is incorrect in this context; 'to me' is the correct preposition to express personal importance. Adding the auxiliary verb and correcting the preposition fixes the grammatical errors.

× The As a student, most of the cases I need to remember some dates in some lessons or subject at school and some really important lessons in my daily life or I have a really difficult schedule, so I need to.

✓ As a student, in most cases I need to remember some dates in some lessons or subjects at school and some really important lessons in my daily life. Also, I have a really difficult schedule, so I need to manage it carefully.

The original sentence starts with an incorrect article 'The' before 'As a student'. Also, 'most of the cases' should be 'in most cases' to be idiomatic. 'Subject' should be plural 'subjects' to agree with 'some'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear at the end; adding a completion improves clarity. These corrections address article misuse, prepositional errors, pluralization, and sentence completeness.

× For example, if I take a remembering memorizing some texts, I just read it and then I take a main idea of the text and then it's it's easier for me to remember and other things I guess I remember like this.

✓ For example, if I am memorizing some texts, I just read them and then I take the main idea of the text, and then it's easier for me to remember other things. I guess I remember like this.

The phrase 'take a remembering memorizing' is incorrect; 'am memorizing' is the correct present continuous form. 'Read it' should be 'read them' to agree with the plural 'texts'. 'Take a main idea' should be 'take the main idea' because it refers to a specific idea. The sentence had repetition 'it's it's' which is corrected. These changes fix verb form, pronoun agreement, article use, and remove redundancy.