记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory something is hard is hard for me”重复且不通顺。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，使回答更自然流畅。

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things, but I try to remember by repeating them several times. I find memorising quite difficult.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，且表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地描述事件，避免重复，并使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

範例: Yes, a few months ago I forgot an important deadline for my school assignment, which affected my final semester scores.

建議: 回答中充满了填充词“uh”，且句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议减少填充词，完整表达原因和结果，使回答更连贯。

範例: Every day, I need to remember to check my email because my school assignments are sent there. If I forget, I might miss important tasks.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，且表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确的表达方式，并说明具体方法。

範例: Usually, I make a daily to-do list and set reminders to help me remember important tasks.

× Not really, but I try to memorize things through repeat it many times.

✓ Not really, but I try to memorize things through repeating them many times.

动词 'repeat' 在这里应使用动名词形式 'repeating'，因为它作为介词 'through' 的宾语。'it' 应改为 'them'，指代复数的 'things'。

× Personally for me I think memory something is hard is hard for me.

✓ Personally, I think memorizing something is hard for me.

句子结构混乱，重复了 'is hard'，且表达不清晰。应简化为 'I think memorizing something is hard for me'，更符合英语表达习惯。

× I surely have few months ago I I few months ago I forgot an important dead light of my UH school assignment that is really important because it's related to my final UH semester scores.

✓ I surely forgot an important deadline of my UH school assignment a few months ago, which was really important because it was related to my final UH semester scores.

时态使用错误，'have' 不应与具体过去时间 'few months ago' 连用。应使用一般过去时 'forgot'。句子重复且结构混乱，需调整顺序和表达。

× Every day I need to, uh, remember to check my e-mail box. Uh, because, uh, because uh, my everyday school assignment will release through the e-mail box, so if I forget it, I will.

✓ Every day I need to remember to check my e-mail inbox because my daily school assignments are sent through the e-mail inbox, so if I forget, I will miss them.

'release through' 用法不当，应改为 'sent through'。'e-mail box' 应为 'e-mail inbox' 更准确。句子末尾不完整，需补充完整表达。

× Usually I will I will set A to do list of every day I need to do and I will set a time. I will set a timeline, uh, in case that I forget or the next thing I need to do.

✓ Usually, I will set a to-do list of things I need to do every day and set a timeline in case I forget the next thing I need to do.

句子重复 'I will'，结构不流畅。'A to do list of every day I need to do' 表达不自然，应调整为 'a to-do list of things I need to do every day'。句子应简洁连贯。