记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I don't really good”应为“I am not really good”。句子结构不够清晰，表达略显冗长且不够自然。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连词连接细节，使表达更流畅。

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things, so I usually make a list to help me remember important tasks. For example, when I started studying, I planned my schedule carefully to stay organized.

建議: 回答中时态和语法使用不准确，如“will forget”应为“forget”，且句子结构不够连贯。建议使用正确时态，简洁表达，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

範例: Yes, I sometimes forget important things, especially when I first entered university. For instance, I forgot to take my vaccine, but my teacher reminded me, so I worked hard to fix my mistake.

建議: 回答内容较为具体，但表达不够自然，部分句子结构不完整，如“take care of much of me”不符合英语习惯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子完整性。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my routine, like my study schedule and daily tasks. Also, I often call my parents because they worry about me and take good care of me.

建議: 回答表达基本清晰，但有语法错误，如“write down in a paper”应为“write it down on paper”，且句子略显冗长。建议使用正确介词，简化句子结构，使表达更自然。

範例: Sometimes I try to remember things in my mind, but usually I write them down on paper and keep the notes in my folder. This way, I can easily remember and avoid forgetting important tasks.

× Well, actually I don't really good at memorizing things, so I always make up the list of plans for me to remember the important things that I need to do.

✓ Well, actually I am not really good at memorizing things, so I always make up a list of plans for me to remember the important things that I need to do.

句中'don't really good'用法错误，正确表达应为'am not really good'，因为形容词前需要系动词。'make up the list'应为'make up a list'，冠词使用错误。

× Well, actually I don't really good at memorizing things, so I always make up the list of plans for me to remember the important things that I need to do.

✓ Well, actually I am not really good at memorizing things, so I always make up a list of plans for me to remember the important things that I need to do.

'the list of plans'中'list'是单数，'plans'是复数，使用冠词'a'更合适，且表达更自然。

× For example, when I started learning, I always make a plan for the schedule and how to do it. So help me to.

✓ For example, when I started learning, I always made a plan for the schedule and how to do it. So it helps me.

时态错误，描述过去习惯应使用过去式'made'。'So help me to'表达不完整，应改为'So it helps me'。

× Well, I sometimes will forget something important, especially I entered the university.

✓ Well, I sometimes forget something important, especially when I entered the university.

'sometimes will forget'用法不当，'sometimes'后直接用一般现在时更合适。'especially I entered the university'缺少连接词，应加'when'。

× For example, I just forget to take my vaccine, but my teacher told me to do it, so I do a lot of work to make up for the mistake.

✓ For example, I just forgot to take my vaccine, but my teacher told me to do it, so I did a lot of work to make up for the mistake.

描述过去事件，动词应使用过去式'forgot'和'did'。

× And there's something that I need to make a call for my parents because they worry about me and take care of much of me.

✓ And there are some things that I need to call my parents about because they worry about me and take care of me a lot.

'make a call for my parents'用法错误，应为'call my parents about'。'take care of much of me'表达不自然，应为'take care of me a lot'。

× And there's something that I need to make a call for my parents because they worry about me and take care of much of me.

✓ And there are some things that I need to call my parents about because they worry about me and take care of me a lot.

'there's something'应为复数'there are some things'，因为后文提到多项内容。

× Well, sometimes I remember it in my brain, but I think the most direct way to remember things is to write down in a paper and put it in my folder so I will remember things easily and not to forget.

✓ Well, sometimes I remember it in my brain, but I think the most direct way to remember things is to write them down on a piece of paper and put it in my folder so I will remember things easily and not forget.

'write down in a paper'应为'write down on a piece of paper'，介词使用错误。'not to forget'应简化为'not forget'。