记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语言较为自然，但存在重复和语法错误，如“what what things”。建议避免重复，注意语法准确性，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget what happened the day before. Therefore, I usually write a shopping list when I go to the supermarket to remind myself of what to buy. Also, memorising English vocabulary is quite challenging for me.

建議: 回答中存在时态和语法错误，如“I had”、“I come”、“I forget”。建议使用正确时态，简洁表达，并用连接词使叙述更连贯。

範例: Yes, I have. In my first year at university, I forgot to bring my ID card to the final exam. I explained this to my teachers, but they asked me to return to my accommodation to get it.

建議: 回答内容具体，但句子结构不完整，建议用完整句子回答问题，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

範例: I need to remember to help my mom water her plants and pick up the clothes hanging on our balcony. Although there are many things to remember daily, they are not very important, so forgetting them is not a big problem.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“wear any anywhere else”。建议注意词汇准确性，句子结构完整，并使用连接词。

範例: I usually write important things down. Sometimes, I put sticky notes on the fridge or other places where I can easily see them. These yellow notes help remind me to complete important tasks.

× Even the things just happened yesterday, I may forget it in the coming day.

✓ Even the things that just happened yesterday, I might forget them the next day.

这里'may'用来表示可能性，但在过去发生的事情后，表达未来可能性时，使用'might'更合适。此外，'it'指代复数的'things'，应改为'them'。

× So when I go to the supermarket, I will write a shopping list to remind me what what things to buy.

✓ So when I go to the supermarket, I will write a shopping list to remind me what things to buy.

句中重复了'what'，属于多余，应删除一个。

× Besides, when I remember the English vocabularies, it is a difficult task.

✓ Besides, remembering English vocabulary is a difficult task.

'Vocabulary'是不可数名词，不用复数形式'vocabularies'，且句子结构不自然，改为动名词短语更流畅。

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I have.

回答中使用了过去完成时'had'，但此处应使用现在完成时'have'，表示过去发生且对现在有影响的经历。

× It was the first year I come.

✓ It was the first year I came.

描述过去的时间点，动词应使用过去式'came'。

× I came into the the university.

✓ I came into the university.

句中'the'重复，应删除多余的一个。

× I forget to bring my ID card in the final examinations at the first term.

✓ I forgot to bring my ID card to the final examinations in the first term.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式'forgot'；介词搭配应为'bring...to...'；'at the first term'应改为'in the first term'。

× So I explained to my teachers that I just forget my ID card.

✓ So I explained to my teachers that I had just forgotten my ID card.

主句为过去时，宾语从句中描述更早发生的动作应使用过去完成时'had forgotten'。

× But the teachers demanded me to come back to my accommodation to bring it back.

✓ But the teachers demanded that I come back to my accommodation to bring it back.

动词'demand'后接宾语从句时，使用虚拟语气，动词用原形'come'，且'demand'后不直接跟宾语加不定式。

× Like helping my mom to water her plants or pick up the clothes which hanging at our balcony.

✓ Like helping my mom water her plants or pick up the clothes hanging on our balcony.

'helping my mom to water'中不需要' to'；'which hanging'应改为现在分词'hanging'；'at our balcony'应改为'on our balcony'。

× So there's a lot of things I need to remember every day, but it's not that important.

✓ So there are a lot of things I need to remember every day, but they're not that important.

'a lot of things'为复数，谓语动词应用复数形式'are'；后半句指代复数，代词应为'they'。

× Sometimes I will forget it, but it's really not a big deal.

✓ Sometimes I forget them, but it's really not a big deal.

'forget'表示习惯性动作，使用一般现在时更合适；'it'指代复数'things'，应改为'them'。

× I will write it down.

✓ I will write things down.

前文提到多件重要的事情，'it'指代不明确，改为'write things down'更准确。

× Sometimes I will write all the important things on a sticky note and then put it on the fridge and wear any anywhere else I can see it.

✓ Sometimes I will write all the important things on sticky notes and then put them on the fridge and wear anywhere else I can see them.

'a sticky note'与'all the important things'数量不匹配，应用复数'sticky notes'；'it'指代复数，应改为'them'；'wear any anywhere'语义不明，可能为'tear'（撕下）或'put'，此处保留原意但语法错误。

× This yellow notes can remind me to do these important things.

✓ These yellow notes can remind me to do these important things.

'notes'为复数，指示代词应使用复数形式'these'。