记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I passed many university exams by studying hard and memorising key information effectively.

建議: Your answer is a bit confusing and repetitive. Try to answer directly and clearly, then provide a specific example. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

範例: Actually, I rarely forget important things. However, sometimes I forget small details, such as my wife's birthday, which I try to remember carefully.

建議: Make your answer more fluent and structured by avoiding filler words and repeating phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember to take my medicines. Therefore, I set alarms on my phone as reminders to ensure I don't forget.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains filler words. Try to complete your sentences clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. Provide specific methods you use to remember important things.

範例: I have a good memory, so I usually remember important things easily. However, if I forget, I set reminders on my phone or write notes in my diary to help me.

× I think I have passed lots of UH exams.

✓ I think I have passed lots of UH exams.

The sentence is correct in using the present perfect tense 'have passed' to indicate experience up to now. No correction needed.

× By learning hard and by memorizing when I'm in the college I can learn.

✓ By studying hard and by memorizing when I'm in college, I can learn.

The phrase 'learning hard' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'studying hard'. Also, 'in the college' should be 'in college' without the article 'the'. This improves clarity and correctness.

× birthdays of the my beloved wife.

✓ birthdays of my beloved wife.

The phrase 'the my beloved wife' is incorrect because 'my' is a possessive adjective and does not require the definite article 'the'. Removing 'the' corrects the phrase.

× I have, uh, kept, uh, alarm, I mean, a reminder for that to remind me to take.

✓ I have set an alarm, I mean, a reminder for that to remind me to take it.

The verb 'kept' is not appropriate here; 'set' is the correct verb for alarms or reminders. Also, 'for that' is vague; adding 'it' clarifies what to take. This improves the sentence's clarity and correctness.

× If not I will make a reminder on my phone or I'm taking some notes in my diary or else I.

✓ If not, I will make a reminder on my phone or take some notes in my diary.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Removing 'or else I' and changing 'I'm taking' to 'take' creates a clear and grammatically correct sentence.