记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“have a bad memorizing”应改为“have a bad memory”，并且句子结构需要更清晰。建议使用简单且正确的句型，避免重复和语法错误。

範例: No, I am not good at memorising things because I often forget where I put my wallet or keys. However, I usually remember important dates like my birthday.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，如“the I forgot”和“the the date”，影响表达的流畅性。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as my anniversary date with my girlfriend. For example, I forgot our five-year anniversary date last year.

建議: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，如“give a calls”和“it is the importance to them”。建议使用正确的动词形式和更清晰的表达，同时增加连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I need to remember to call my grandma regularly because it is important to keep in touch and maintain our relationship.

建議: 表达不清晰，存在词汇错误，如“rise down”应为“write down”，“give a take a note”表达混乱。建议使用正确的短语和词汇，并简洁表达。

範例: I usually write down important things in my phone or take notes, and sometimes I set alarms to remind myself.

× No, I have a bad memorizing because I always forgot where's my wallet or where's my key.

✓ No, I have a bad memory because I always forget where my wallet or my key is.

这里'memorizing'是动名词，不能用作名词，正确的词是'memory'表示记忆力。另外，'forgot'是过去式，句子描述的是习惯动作，应使用一般现在时'forget'。'where's my wallet'的语序应改为'where my wallet is'。

× No, I have a bad memorizing because I always forgot where's my wallet or where's my key.

✓ No, I have a bad memory because I always forget where my wallet or my key is.

句中'always forgot'描述习惯动作，应该用一般现在时'forget'，而不是过去式'forgot'。

× No, I have a bad memorizing because I always forgot where's my wallet or where's my key.

✓ No, I have a bad memory because I always forget where my wallet or my key is.

'where's my wallet'中，疑问词从句中语序应为陈述语序，不能用缩写形式，应改为'where my wallet is'。

× Yes, definitely the I forgot the important things like my anniversaries with my girlfriends.

✓ Yes, definitely I forgot important things like my anniversaries with my girlfriends.

句中'the I forgot'多余了定冠词'the'，应删除。

× Yes, definitely the I forgot the important things like my anniversaries with my girlfriends.

✓ Yes, definitely I forgot important things like my anniversaries with my girlfriends.

'the important things'中，'important'是形容词，前面不需要定冠词'the'，除非特指。这里应去掉'the'。

× Yes, definitely the I forgot the important things like my anniversaries with my girlfriends.

✓ Yes, definitely I forgot important things like my anniversaries with my girlfriends.

句中多余的'the'导致语法错误，应删除。

× Uh, the the date, umm, because it is our five years old anniversary, but I forgot the date.

✓ Uh, the date, umm, because it is our five-year anniversary, but I forgot the date.

'five years old anniversary'中，'years old'用于描述年龄，周年纪念应用'five-year anniversary'。

× I have to remember to give a calls to my grandma and I think it is the importance to them to keep a conversation every week and keep the relationships to each other.

✓ I have to remember to give a call to my grandma and I think it is important for them to keep a conversation every week and maintain the relationship with each other.

'a calls'中'a'是单数冠词，'calls'是复数，二者不匹配，应改为'a call'。'the importance'用法不当，应改为形容词'important'。'keep the relationships'应为单数'relationship'，且搭配'with each other'。

× I have to remember to give a calls to my grandma and I think it is the importance to them to keep a conversation every week and keep the relationships to each other.

✓ I have to remember to give a call to my grandma and I think it is important for them to keep a conversation every week and maintain the relationship with each other.

'importance to them'应改为'important for them'，'keep the relationships to each other'应改为'maintain the relationship with each other'。

× I have to remember to give a calls to my grandma and I think it is the importance to them to keep a conversation every week and keep the relationships to each other.

✓ I have to remember to give a call to my grandma and I think it is important for them to keep a conversation every week and maintain the relationship with each other.

'the importance'用法错误，应使用形容词'important'。

× I have to remember to give a calls to my grandma and I think it is the importance to them to keep a conversation every week and keep the relationships to each other.

✓ I have to remember to give a call to my grandma and I think it is important for them to keep a conversation every week and maintain the relationship with each other.

'keep the relationships to each other'中，介词'to'用法错误，应改为'with'。

× I always rise down to give a take a note and or write in my phones to remember the important things and sometimes I will give uh make a alarms to remember.

✓ I always write down notes or write in my phone to remember important things, and sometimes I set alarms to remind me.

'rise down'应为'write down'，'give a take a note'表达不正确，应简化为'write down notes'。'write in my phones'应为'write in my phone'。'make a alarms'应为'set alarms'。

× I always rise down to give a take a note and or write in my phones to remember the important things and sometimes I will give uh make a alarms to remember.

✓ I always write down notes or write in my phone to remember important things, and sometimes I set alarms to remind me.

'a alarms'中冠词与复数不匹配，应改为复数'alarm'且去掉冠词或用单数形式。

× I always rise down to give a take a note and or write in my phones to remember the important things and sometimes I will give uh make a alarms to remember.

✓ I always write down notes or write in my phone to remember important things, and sometimes I set alarms to remind me.

'to remember'后面缺少宾语，改为'remind me'更符合表达习惯。