记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo sentence haru cha ra kehi grammatical truti pani cha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha jawab dinu parcha ra thulo sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banau. Linking words jastai 'because' ra 'sometimes' ko prayog thik tarikale garnu parcha. English ma natural ra prabhavi uttar dinu ko lagi, sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banau.

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget where I put my shoes or pencils. Sometimes, I even need help from my mother to remember things.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo ra alikati asamarthak sentence haru chan. Tapai le prashna ko sidha jawab dinu parcha ra supporting details lai logical linking words jastai 'but', 'because' ko prayog garera spashta banau. English ma natural ra prabhavi uttar dinu ko lagi, sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banau ra grammatical truti haru sudharau.

範例: Yes, I forgot my mother's birthday a few months ago. Although I remembered it a few days before, I forgot on the day itself and missed celebrating in the morning. My sister reminded me that it was our mother's birthday.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo sentence haru chan ra kehi grammatical truti pani chan. Tapai le prashna ko sidha jawab dinu parcha ra supporting details lai linking words jastai 'but', 'because' ko prayog garera spashta banau. English ma natural ra prabhavi uttar dinu ko lagi, sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banau ra grammatical truti haru sudharau.

範例: I don't have many things to remember daily, but I often forget to drink water. After waking up and doing my morning routine like washing and brushing, I sometimes forget to drink water.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo ra alikati asamarthak sentence haru chan. Tapai le prashna ko sidha jawab dinu parcha ra supporting details lai linking words jastai 'for example', 'also' ko prayog garera spashta banau. English ma natural ra prabhavi uttar dinu ko lagi, sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banau ra grammatical truti haru sudharau.

範例: When I forget important events like birthdays, I use a diary where I write down all special birthdays and other important details. I also rely on reminders from my social media accounts.

× Actually not to because I just forgot the things which I have done sometimes before and I forget where I put my shoes, sometime pencil and I really need help from my mother so I'm not good at memorizing things.

✓ Actually not too, because I just forget the things which I have done sometimes before and I forget where I put my shoes, sometimes pencil and I really need help from my mother so I'm not good at memorizing things.

The phrase 'not to' is incorrect here; it should be 'not too' to mean 'also not'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The pronoun usage 'I just forgot the things which I have done sometimes before' is awkward; 'forget' fits better in present tense to match the context of habitual forgetting.

× Yes, I have actually just couple of months ago there was my mother birthday and I just remembered that things from since for 2-3 days before.

✓ Yes, actually just a couple of months ago it was my mother's birthday and I just remembered that thing since 2-3 days before.

The sentence mixes tenses and has article errors. 'Have' should be omitted for past event 'just a couple of months ago'. 'There was my mother birthday' is incorrect; it should be 'it was my mother's birthday' to show possession and correct subject. 'That things' should be 'that thing' to match singular. 'From since for' is incorrect; 'since' or 'for' should be used properly.

× But at a certain time I forgot that and I just missed the chance to celebrate it at the morning time and my sister told me that it's a mother birthday today.

✓ But at a certain time I forgot that and I just missed the chance to celebrate it in the morning and my sister told me that it was my mother's birthday today.

'At the morning time' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in the morning'. 'It's a mother birthday' should be 'it was my mother's birthday' to show possession and past tense consistency.

× There is no particular things that I have to remember each and every day, but most often I forgot to drink a water because I just wake up at all the morning and do some facials work like wash and brush teeth and then again I have to drink a water.

✓ There are no particular things that I have to remember each and every day, but most often I forget to drink water because I just wake up in the morning and do some facial work like washing and brushing my teeth and then again I have to drink water.

'There is no particular things' is incorrect; 'things' is plural so 'are' should be used. 'I forgot' should be 'I forget' to indicate habitual action. 'A water' is incorrect; 'water' is uncountable and does not need an article. 'Facials work' should be 'facial work'. 'Wash and brush teeth' should be 'washing and brushing my teeth' for correct verb forms and possessive pronoun.

× Actually when I forgot some important events like for example my birthday, my mother birthday, my sister birthday at that time I have a diary where I wrote each and every special person birthday at as well as the details that I may forgot in my life and more often in my social media passport.

✓ Actually, when I forget some important events like, for example, my birthday, my mother's birthday, my sister's birthday, at that time I have a diary where I write each and every special person's birthday as well as the details that I may forget in my life and more often in my social media posts.

The sentence has tense inconsistency; 'forgot' should be 'forget' to indicate habitual action. Possessive forms 'my mother birthday' and 'my sister birthday' should be 'my mother's birthday' and 'my sister's birthday'. 'Wrote' should be 'write' to match present tense. 'Special person birthday' should be 'special person's birthday' to show possession. 'May forgot' should be 'may forget'. 'Social media passport' is incorrect; likely meant 'social media posts'.