记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сіздің жауабыңызда сөйлем құрылымы мен сөздерді дұрыс қолдану маңызды. Мысалы, сөйлемдеріңізді қысқа әрі нақты етіп құрастырыңыз, артық сөздерді азайтыңыз. Сонымен қатар, мысалдарыңызды нақты әрі түсінікті етіңіз.

範例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, when my mother reminded me about the letter 'K' in the word 'car', I remembered it all day. This helped me remember historical facts at school.

建議: Жауабыңызда сөздерді дұрыс және нақты қолданыңыз. Қайталауларды азайтып, сөйлемдерді логикалық түрде байланыстырыңыз. Мысалы, 'I always make notes about important things, so I don't forget them.'

範例: I have never forgotten anything important because I always make notes about important things in my daily life. This helps me remember them easily.

建議: Жауабыңызда нақты және түсінікті сөйлемдер құрыңыз. Қосымша ақпаратты байланыстыру үшін байланыстыру сөздерін қолданыңыз. Мысалы, 'I need to remember to do my homework and housework because it helps me relax.'

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember to do my homework and housework. This helps me relax and keeps my routine organized.

建議: Жауабыңызда сөйлемдерді толық және түсінікті етіп құрыңыз. Артық сөздер мен түсініксіз сөз тіркестерін алып тастаңыз. Мысалы, 'I write down important things and review my notes to remember them.'

範例: I write down all important things and remember them by reading my notes. This is an effective way to avoid forgetting important tasks.

× Yes, I could say that I'm good at memorizing things.

✓ Yes, I could say that I'm good at memorising things.

The original sentence uses 'memorizing' which is the American English spelling. Since the question uses 'memorising' (British English), it is better to keep consistent spelling. The verb + -ing form is correct here, but spelling consistency is important.

× For example, when my mom told me that don't forget, uh, K of car, I remember about that all day and it helps me in the, uh, historical things to remember it at school.

✓ For example, when my mom told me 'Don't forget the K of car,' I remembered that all day and it helped me remember historical things at school.

The original sentence has sentence structure errors and tense inconsistency. 'Don't forget' should be quoted as direct speech. 'I remember' should be past tense 'I remembered' to match 'my mom told me'. 'It helps me in the historical things to remember it' is awkward; corrected to 'it helped me remember historical things'.

× Yes, I could say that I'm good at memorizing things.

✓ Yes, I can say that I'm good at memorising things.

The modal verb 'could' implies past ability or conditional, but here the speaker wants to express present ability or confidence, so 'can' is more appropriate.

× I remember about that all day and it helps me in the, uh, historical things to remember it at school.

✓ I remembered that all day and it helped me with historical things to remember it at school.

The verb 'remember' does not require the preposition 'about' in this context. Also, 'helps me in the historical things' is incorrect; 'helped me with historical things' is correct usage.

× From my experience, I have never forgotten anything important for me because I always make, uh, notes, uh, about important things for me in my daily life.

✓ From my experience, I have never forgotten anything important to me because I always make notes about important things in my daily life.

The phrase 'important for me' is better expressed as 'important to me'. Also, 'make notes about important things for me' is redundant; 'make notes about important things' suffices.

× And it helps me to, uh, don't forget this.

✓ And it helps me not to forget this.

The phrase 'helps me to don't forget' is incorrect. The correct form is 'helps me not to forget' because 'not' negates the infinitive verb.

× So in my daily life it is important to do not forget about doing my homework and also housework.

✓ So in my daily life, it is important not to forget to do my homework and also housework.

The phrase 'do not forget about doing' is awkward. The correct form is 'not to forget to do'. Also, 'forget about doing' is less common and less precise here.

× Maybe it helps me to relax and also it is general jinx in daily life.

✓ Maybe it helps me to relax and also it is a general thing in daily life.

The word 'jinx' is incorrect here; likely the speaker meant 'thing'. Also, 'general jinx' is not a correct collocation.

× So it's that's why it's important.

✓ So that's why it's important.

The phrase 'So it's that's why it's important' is redundant and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'So that's why it's important'.

× I write down all my important things and I remember it when I'm reading this, uh, notes.

✓ I write down all my important things and I remember them when I'm reading these notes.

The pronouns 'it' and 'this' do not agree in number with 'all my important things' and 'notes'. The correct plural forms are 'them' and 'these'.

× I write down all my important things and I remember it when I'm reading this, uh, notes.

✓ I write down all my important things and I remember them when I'm reading these notes.

The pronouns 'it' and 'this' do not agree in number with 'all my important things' and 'notes'. The correct plural forms are 'them' and 'these'.

× So that's the beneficial way to remember important things and I. Called, uh, chair. Avoid that all people.

✓ So that's a beneficial way to remember important things. I call it a 'chair'. Everyone avoids that.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It seems the speaker is trying to say 'I call it a chair' and 'Everyone avoids that'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.