记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'is seems' và sử dụng từ đúng như 'memories' thay vì 'memori'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc.

範例: I usually forget many things, but I tend to remember special events like anniversaries or sad stories better because they have a strong emotional impact on me.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn. Tránh lặp từ như 'I sometimes I' và dùng từ đúng như 'miss the bus' thay vì 'miss the hours of a bus'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ được liên kết bằng từ nối.

範例: Sometimes, I forget important things in my daily life. For example, I have missed the bus or even an exam because I didn't remember the schedule properly.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên sắp xếp ý tưởng mạch lạc hơn, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'than the English lesson' và tránh lặp từ như 'everything'. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời logic hơn.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my study schedule, my parents' anniversary, and other important dates like English lessons because all these things are important to me.

建議: Bạn nên cải thiện cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn. Tránh câu không hoàn chỉnh như 'I guess you too, not everything in my phone' và dùng từ chính xác như 'goals' thay vì 'achievements objective'. Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc.

範例: I usually don't rely only on my phone to remember things. Instead, I write important goals on a blank paper and put it on my desk, which helps me remember them better.

× I easily forget things but for some special events like anniversary or sad stories is seems that I have a better memori memories with those kind of stories.

✓ I easily forget things but for some special events like anniversaries or sad stories, it seems that I have a better memory with those kinds of stories.

The sentence contains incorrect adjective/adverb usage: 'is seems' should be 'it seems'; 'memori memories' is redundant and should be 'memory'; 'anniversary' should be plural 'anniversaries' to match 'some special events'; 'those kind of stories' should be 'those kinds of stories' for correct plural form. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× It happens sometimes that I've forgotten.

✓ It sometimes happens that I've forgotten.

The adverb 'sometimes' is better placed before the verb 'happens' for natural English word order. The sentence uses present perfect 'I've forgotten' correctly to indicate past experience relevant to the present.

× I forgot important things that I have to do in daily life.

✓ I forget important things that I have to do in daily life.

The sentence mixes past tense 'forgot' with present tense 'have to do'. Since the context is habitual (daily life), present tense 'forget' is appropriate to indicate repeated action.

× For example, I sometimes I just miss the hours of a bus or the basket or the exams.

✓ For example, sometimes I just miss the bus schedule, the basket, or the exams.

The sentence has redundant 'I sometimes I' and unclear phrase 'miss the hours of a bus'. 'Miss the bus schedule' is clearer. Also, listing items should be separated properly with commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× In daily life, I have to remember the schedule of uh, study or the anniversary of my parents, the important days than the English lesson.

✓ In daily life, I have to remember the study schedule, my parents' anniversary, important days, and the English lesson.

The phrase 'schedule of uh, study' is awkward; 'study schedule' is better. 'The anniversary of my parents' is better as 'my parents' anniversary'. 'Than the English lesson' is incorrect; 'and the English lesson' is appropriate to list items.

× Everything, uh, it happens that everything in life is important to.

✓ Everything, uh, it happens that everything in life is important too.

The sentence ends with 'important to' which is incorrect; it should be 'important too' to mean 'also'. The pronoun usage is acceptable but the phrase needs correction for meaning.

× I guess you too, not everything in my phone or I write all important achievements objective in a blank paper and put them in front of me in the desktop.

✓ I guess you too. Not everything is in my phone, so I write all important objectives on a blank paper and put it in front of me on the desktop.

The sentence is fragmented and confusing. 'You too' should be separated. 'Not everything in my phone' needs verb 'is'. 'Achievements objective' is unclear; 'important objectives' is better. 'In a blank paper' should be 'on a blank paper'. 'Put them' refers to plural but 'all important objectives' is plural, so 'them' is correct but 'it' is better if referring to the paper. 'In front of me in the desktop' should be 'in front of me on the desktop'.