记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中表达了个人情况，但语言不够自然，句子结构有些混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: I'm not very good at memorizing because I have ADHD, which makes it harder for me to remember things. For example, I often forget where I put my phone or computer.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不够流畅，且细节描述不够具体。建议使用正确时态，丰富细节，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once left my computer in a coffee shop, but I made an effort to go back and retrieve it.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不准确，句子结构混乱。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并提供具体例子。

範例: I usually take notes and type important things on my computer. For example, I keep a list of groceries I need to buy.

建議: 回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议使用更自然的表达方式，明确说明记忆方法，并用连接词使句子连贯。

範例: I write notes and place them on my desk. When I study or work there, I see the notes and remember to do important tasks.

× I always forget where is my phone and where is my computer.

✓ I always forget where my phone and my computer are.

句中“where is my phone”和“where is my computer”是疑问句语序，作为宾语从句时应使用陈述句语序，即“where my phone and my computer are”。

× In the past I forget my computer in a coffee shop.

✓ In the past I forgot my computer in a coffee shop.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式，forget的过去式是forgot。

× I take my effort to get it.

✓ I made an effort to get it.

表达过去的动作时，动词应使用过去式，且习惯表达是“make an effort”，不能用“take my effort”。

× We'll take some notes and type some important thing in my computer is my first choice.

✓ I take some notes and typing important things on my computer is my first choice.

“some important thing”应为复数“important things”，且句子结构不完整，需调整。

× We'll take some notes and type some important thing in my computer is my first choice.

✓ Taking some notes and typing important things on my computer is my first choice.

句子主语应为动名词短语，表示习惯动作，故用“Taking”和“typing”。

× I always type which food I need to buy in my computer.

✓ I always type which food I need to buy on my computer.

“type”后面表示在电脑上操作，介词应为“on”，而非“in”。

× I always take note with them and put them on my desk so when I study or use the desk I will see the notes and do some important things.

✓ I always take notes with them and put them on my desk so when I study or use the desk I will see the notes and do some important things.

“take note”应为复数形式“take notes”，表示记笔记。