记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“memoracy”应为“memorising”。句子结构不够清晰，表达重复且不够简洁。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并且注意语法正确。

範例: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget important details, which makes me feel frustrated.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，如“such As for example”重复且不自然。建议简洁明了地表达，并使用恰当的连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things, like my parents' birthdays. Even though their birthday parties happen every year, I often forget the exact date until the day itself.

建議: 回答中时态使用不当，句子结构混乱，信息表达不够清晰。建议使用正确时态，简洁地列出需要记住的事项，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: As a college student, I need to remember my weekly schedule, including class dates, lecture times, and homework deadlines.

建議: 回答中表达不够自然，部分句子不完整且用词不当。建议用更自然的表达方式，清晰地列出方法，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

範例: I use three methods to remember important things: first, I make a written list; second, I try to keep them in my mind; and third, I take photos with my iPhone as reminders.

× As a fact, I think I'm not good at memoracy, memorizing things, because I always forget something and regret, regret that I didn't do this thing.

✓ As a fact, I think I'm not good at memorizing things, because I always forget something and regret that I didn't do it.

“memoracy”不是正确的单词，应使用动名词“memorizing”表示记忆的动作。重复使用“regret”不自然，应简化为一次。

× I always be confused about that, so I'm not good at it.

✓ I am always confused about that, so I'm not good at it.

“be”动词应使用正确形式“am”，且“always be”不符合英语习惯，应改为“I am always confused”。

× Yes, I forgot something important such As for example my parents birthday.

✓ Yes, I forgot something important, such as my parents' birthday.

“such As for example”重复且错误，应使用“such as”表示举例。父母生日应加所有格“parents' birthday”。

× The birthday party will be held every year, but every year I don't remember the date so I forget until the day.

✓ The birthday party is held every year, but every year I don't remember the date, so I forget until the day.

描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时，“will be held”改为“is held”。

× I was a college student so I need to remember my weekdays, weekdays arrangement and the classes and the lectures date and the class time and the homework the most important.

✓ I am a college student, so I need to remember my weekdays, weekday arrangements, the dates of classes and lectures, class times, and homework, which are the most important.

学生身份应使用现在时“am”，名词复数和表达更准确。

× I have 3 methods. The one is to make a list to write, write down the things we need to remember, important thing and #2 is to remember in your keeping your mind.

✓ I have three methods. The first is to make a list and write down the things we need to remember, important things; the second is to keep them in your mind.

数字应写成单词形式“three”，表达更清晰，句子结构需调整。

× And the third one is as a picture of the iPhone.

✓ And the third one is to take a picture with the iPhone.

“as a picture of the iPhone”表达不正确，应使用“take a picture with the iPhone”表示用手机拍照。