记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然流畅，存在语法错误和重复，且表达不够简洁。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达记忆困难和解决方法。

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I try to remember what my teacher says, but it's difficult for me. Maybe it's because of my age or poor memory. However, I overcome this by repeating the information many times.

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱，语法错误较多，缺乏连贯性。建议完整表达观点，使用连词连接句子，并避免重复和语法错误。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things, especially after giving birth. In China, people say that new mothers often have poor memory for about three years. I experienced this myself and forgot many things during that time.

建議: 回答较为清晰，但表达略显重复且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，并用连词使句子更连贯。

範例: In my daily life, I don't need to remember many things. However, I have exams twice a year for my bachelor's degree, so I need to remember a lot of information before those times.

建議: 回答表达不够流畅，存在语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并说明具体方法。

範例: I find it hard to remember important things, so I write them down on paper or in my phone. This method helps me not to forget important tasks, and it works well for me.

× I try to remember all the articles teacher has the has told me but I really couldn't.

✓ I try to remember all the articles the teacher has told me but I really couldn't.

这里缺少定冠词“the”，且“articles”是复数，前面应有冠词修饰。

× I try to remember all the articles teacher has the has told me but I really couldn't.

✓ I tried to remember all the articles the teacher had told me but I really couldn't.

句子中描述过去的动作，时态应使用过去时态，保持时态一致。

× Maybe it's because my age or maybe I just have very bad memory, but I conquered it by repeating again and again to make it.

✓ Maybe it's because of my age or maybe I just have a very bad memory, but I conquered it by repeating again and again to make it.

“because”后应接介词短语“because of”，且“memory”前应加不定冠词“a”。

× Maybe it's because my age or maybe I just have very bad memory, but I conquered it by repeating again and again to make it.

✓ Maybe it's because of my age or maybe I just have a very bad memory, but I conquered it by repeating again and again to make it.

“because”后面应使用介词“of”构成介词短语。

× So in China they always say that after you give birth to children to a child three years, you will you will be as idiots as as bad memory as idiot.

✓ So in China they always say that after you give birth to a child, for three years, you will be as forgetful as an idiot.

句子中“give birth to children to a child three years”结构混乱，应改为“give birth to a child, for three years”。“as idiots as as bad memory as idiot”表达错误，应改为“as forgetful as an idiot”。

× So in China they always say that after you give birth to children to a child three years, you will you will be as idiots as as bad memory as idiot.

✓ So in China they always say that after you give birth to a child, for three years, you will be as forgetful as an idiot.

“children”是复数，前文应为单数“a child”，保持一致。

× So I forgot a lot of things.

✓ So I forgot a lot of things.

句子时态正确，无需修改。

× Well in my daily life actually there are not so many things I need to remember but I actually have exams twice a year to get my bachelor dis degree.

✓ Well, in my daily life, actually there are not so many things I need to remember but I actually have exams twice a year to get my bachelor's degree.

“bachelor dis degree”拼写错误，应为“bachelor's degree”，且“bachelor's”为所有格。

× So before this time I need to remember a lot of things but the daily life not too much.

✓ So before this time I need to remember a lot of things but in daily life not too much.

“the daily life”用法不当，应去掉定冠词“the”，改为“in daily life”。

× I really couldn't remember. So because I know I cannot, I would just remark down on a paper or in my cell phone.

✓ I really couldn't remember. So because I know I cannot, I would just write down on a paper or in my cell phone.

“remark down”用法错误，应为“write down”。

× I would just remark down on a paper or in my cell phone.

✓ I would just write down on a piece of paper or in my cell phone.

“a paper”应改为“a piece of paper”，更符合英语习惯。

× That works. It really works on the.

✓ That works. It really works.

句子末尾“on the”不完整，应删除。