记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时可以增加具体例子来丰富内容。

範例: Yes, I used to be good at memorizing things when I was younger because I was very energetic. However, recently, my memory has declined due to anxiety, which makes it harder to remember details.

建議: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时避免使用“a long apology message”这种模糊描述。

範例: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday because I was very busy. When I saw her post the next day, I felt guilty, so I quickly sent her a big cake along with a sincere apology.

建議: 回答较为简洁，但句子结构稍显简单，建议使用连接词连接句子，并且注意大小写和语法细节。

範例: I need to remember many things daily, such as meetings, classes, and guidelines. Therefore, I write to-do lists to help remind myself.

建議: 回答内容丰富，但句子连接不够紧密，建议使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，同时避免重复表达。

範例: I find writing to-do lists the most useful method to remember important things. Additionally, I set reminders, such as alarms to wake me up, and I also use sticky notes to keep important information visible.

× Well, there are a bunch of things I need to remember in my daily life.

✓ Well, there are lots of things I need to remember in my daily life.

“a bunch of”在正式语境中不太合适，建议用“lots of”表达“许多”，更自然。

× For example meetings, classes and guidelines and I have to write down A to do list to remind myself.

✓ For example, meetings, classes, and guidelines, and I have to write down a to-do list to remind myself.

“A to do list”中“to do list”应加连字符变成“to-do list”，且“a”应小写，句中缺少逗号分隔列举项，需加逗号。

× Well, I still think the most useful way is to write down some to do lists, and sometimes I also set reminders for example to wake me up.

✓ Well, I still think the most useful way is to write down some to-do lists, and sometimes I also set reminders, for example, to wake me up.

“to do lists”应加连字符变成“to-do lists”，且“for example”前后应加逗号以分隔插入语。