记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can clearly remember my childhood memories, which are very special to me. These memories are vivid and always bring me happiness when I think about them.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important dates before, such as my own birthday and my mother's birthday. This happened because I was very focused on my studies. In the future, I will try to remember these special days better because they are very important to me.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lặp từ và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp lại từ không cần thiết và sắp xếp ý tưởng một cách logic. Thêm các chi tiết cụ thể và từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks, so I usually set reminders on my phone. For example, I set an alarm to study for two hours every day, which helps me stay focused and manage my time well.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

範例: I remember important things by repeating them in my mind several times. If it is a happy memory, I like to share it with my friends, which helps me keep it fresh in my memory.

× I own, I always remember when I, I was a childhood because that is my most beautiful memories I have ever get.

✓ I always remember when I was a child because those are my most beautiful memories I have ever had.

The word 'childhood' is a noun referring to a period, but here the correct form is 'child' to refer to the time when the speaker was young. 'Memories' is plural, so 'that is' should be 'those are'. Also, 'have ever get' is incorrect; it should be 'have ever had' because 'had' is the past participle of 'have'.

× I own, I always remember when I, I was a childhood because that is my most beautiful memories I have ever get.

✓ I always remember when I was a child because those are my most beautiful memories I have ever had.

The verb 'get' should be in the past participle form 'had' after 'have ever' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× And I think that is a, I think that is the never like the vividly memories.

✓ And I think those are the most vivid memories.

'Memories' is plural, so 'that is' should be 'those are'. 'Never like the vividly memories' is incorrect; it should be 'the most vivid memories' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I think yes, uh, actually that is my birthday and my mom birthday because I focus on my study a lot.

✓ I think yes, actually that was my birthday and my mom's birthday because I focused on my studies a lot.

The event happened in the past, so past tense 'was' and 'focused' should be used. Also, 'my mom birthday' should be 'my mom's birthday' to show possession. 'Study' should be plural 'studies' to refer to academic work in general.

× So I forgive it.

✓ So I forgot it.

The word 'forgive' means to pardon someone, but the intended meaning is 'forgot', which means to fail to remember.

× I think next time I will be focused on my mom birthday because that is the important day in my, in my life.

✓ I think next time I will focus on my mom's birthday because that is an important day in my life.

'Will be focused' is less natural than 'will focus' for future intention. 'My mom birthday' should be 'my mom's birthday' to indicate possession. 'The important day' should be 'an important day' as it is one of many important days.

× I I think I need to take note to my phone on my phone and after that it will like it will ring and encourage me to do something especially that is the study like I always spend 2 hours to study every day and it's always told me.

✓ I think I need to take notes on my phone, and after that, it will ring and remind me to do something, especially studying. I always spend 2 hours studying every day, and it always reminds me.

'Take note to my phone' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take notes on my phone'. 'It will like it will ring' is redundant; 'it will ring' suffices. 'Encourage me to do something especially that is the study' is awkward; 'remind me to study' is clearer. 'It's always told me' should be 'it always reminds me'.

× I always talk it again, again, again, a lot of times in my mind and I think that is if it is, uh, important things like, uh, some happiness story or something, I want to talk with my friend.

✓ I always repeat it again and again many times in my mind, and I think that if it is important things like a happy story or something, I want to talk with my friend.

'Talk it again' is incorrect; the verb 'repeat' fits better. 'A lot of times' is better expressed as 'many times'. 'Some happiness story' should be 'a happy story' to use the correct adjective form.

× I always keep it in my mind and tell it like with myself and.

✓ I always keep it in my mind and tell it to myself.

'Tell it like with myself and' is incorrect and incomplete. The correct phrase is 'tell it to myself' to indicate self-directed speech.