记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'my memories is'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng liên từ để bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về cách bạn học từ vựng và kết quả đạt được.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, at school, I regularly practice learning new vocabulary, and I can remember about 12 words within 2 minutes, which helps me improve my language skills.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý. Câu trả lời nên cụ thể hơn về việc bạn đã quên điều gì và hậu quả ra sao, cũng như cách bạn cải thiện.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, last week I missed an exam at school, so I got a zero. Since then, I have been trying to use a calendar to remember important dates.

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý. Bạn nên nói trực tiếp về những điều cần nhớ trong cuộc sống hàng ngày và lý do cụ thể.

範例: In daily life, I think it is important to remember how to treat others kindly. This helps me maintain good relationships with my family and friends and improves our communication.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và dùng từ vựng chính xác. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc tốt hơn và dùng liên từ để nối các ý. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về việc ghi chú và xem lại để nhớ việc quan trọng.

範例: There are many ways to remember important things, but I find writing them down on paper is the most effective. For example, I review my notes twice a day, which helps me remember my tasks and feel more organized.

× Yes of course I love to remember things and my memories is also good.

✓ Yes of course I love to remember things and my memory is also good.

The word 'memories' is plural, but the verb 'is' is singular, causing a subject-verb agreement error. Also, 'memory' as a singular noun fits better here to refer to the ability to remember. Use 'memory is' instead of 'memories is'.

× I can't forget somethings important.

✓ I can't forget something important.

The word 'somethings' is incorrect; 'something' is an indefinite pronoun and is always singular and uncountable. Using 'something' is correct here.

× For example last quick I forgot to do my exam at my school so my point is low and also zero and I try to practice like to remember the day I can do the exam.

✓ For example, last week I forgot to do my exam at my school so my score was low and also zero, and I try to practice to remember the day I can do the exam.

'Last quick' is a typo and should be 'last week'. 'Point' is better replaced with 'score' in this context. The verb 'is' should be past tense 'was' to match the past event. The sentence structure is awkward; 'try to practice like to remember the day I can do the exam' is unclear but corrected to 'try to practice to remember the day I can do the exam' to improve clarity.

× Well, in daily life I think the most important thing to remember is how I treat anyone because that they would the ways I can express my behaviour to people like my family, my friends and also can improve the relationships more better.

✓ Well, in daily life I think the most important thing to remember is how I treat others because that is the way I can express my behaviour to people like my family, my friends and also improve relationships better.

'Anyone' is incorrect here; 'others' is more appropriate. 'That they would the ways' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'that is the way'. 'More better' is incorrect; 'better' alone suffices. Also, 'improve the relationships' is better as 'improve relationships' without 'the'.

× Well there are many ways to remember things but I think not into the paper is the most effective.

✓ Well there are many ways to remember things but I think writing them on paper is the most effective.

'Not into the paper' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'writing them on paper'. Using 'writing them on paper' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Like you can see it twice days out, 4th day when you free and it's also can remind you what you need to do today and make you more feel better.

✓ Like you can see it twice a day, on the 4th day when you are free, and it can also remind you what you need to do today and make you feel better.

'Twice days out' is incorrect; 'twice a day' is correct. '4th day when you free' needs 'on the 4th day when you are free'. 'It's also can remind' is incorrect; 'it can also remind' is correct. 'Make you more feel better' is incorrect; 'make you feel better' is correct.