记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만, 중복되는 표현과 어색한 문장이 있습니다. 예를 들어, 'Every vocabulary has disappeared' 대신 'I forget all the vocabulary I memorized'와 같이 명확하게 표현하는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 'Uh'와 같은 불필요한 감탄사는 피하고, 문장을 간결하게 구성하세요.

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I try to learn new English vocabulary every day, but I often forget them by the next morning, which makes me frustrated.

建議: 답변에 중복과 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'Yes last week I exactly 2 weeks ago'는 혼란스러우니 한 시점으로 명확히 표현하세요. 또한, 'I said her really sorry' 대신 'I apologized to her'와 같이 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요.

範例: Yes, about two weeks ago, I forgot my best friend's birthday. I felt very sorry and apologized to her sincerely.

建議: 답변이 명확하지만, 연결어를 사용하여 문장을 더 자연스럽게 만들 수 있습니다. 예를 들어, 'because' 대신 'since'나 'so'를 사용하고, 'also' 위치를 조정하여 문장 흐름을 개선하세요.

範例: I usually use my smartphone calendar app since it shows my daily schedule clearly, so I check it every morning to stay organized.

建議: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적입니다. 다만, 'important schedule' 대신 'important tasks or appointments'와 같이 더 구체적인 단어를 사용하면 좋습니다. 또한, 'every time when I leave the room' 대신 'every time I leave the room'로 간결하게 표현하세요.

範例: I usually write important tasks or appointments on sticky notes and stick them on my door because I see them every time I leave the room. It's a simple but effective method.

× Uh, nowadays I memorize my English vocabulary every day, but I sleep and I wake up in the morning.

✓ Uh, nowadays I memorize my English vocabulary every day, but I sleep and wake up in the morning.

The sentence contains an unnecessary repetition of the subject 'I' before 'wake up'. In English, when two verbs share the same subject, the subject is not repeated before the second verb. Removing the second 'I' improves sentence fluency and correctness.

× Every vocabulary has disappeared.

✓ Every vocabulary word has disappeared.

The word 'vocabulary' is an uncountable noun and cannot be used with 'every' which requires countable nouns. Using 'vocabulary word' makes it countable and grammatically correct.

× Yes last week I exactly 2 weeks ago I forgot my friend's birthday.

✓ Yes, exactly 2 weeks ago I forgot my friend's birthday.

The phrase 'last week' conflicts with 'exactly 2 weeks ago'. Also, the sentence lacks proper punctuation. Removing 'last week' and adding a comma after 'Yes' clarifies the time reference and improves sentence structure.

× She is my best friend so at the time I really feel I really felt sorry about her and I said her really sorry.

✓ She is my best friend, so at the time I really felt sorry for her and I said I was really sorry.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly ('feel' should be 'felt'). The phrase 'said her really sorry' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'said I was really sorry'. Also, 'sorry about her' should be 'sorry for her' to express sympathy.

× I said her really sorry.

✓ I said I was really sorry.

The verb 'say' does not take an indirect object without a preposition. To express apology, the correct structure is 'say I am sorry' or 'say I was sorry'. The original sentence incorrectly uses 'her' as an object.