记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より明確で簡潔な文を使い、具体的な例を整理して述べることが重要です。

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember people's names, important dates, and prices when shopping.

建議: 内容が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、具体的な状況を簡潔に説明する練習をしましょう。

範例: Yes, I once forgot to set an alarm before an important exam in high school, so I woke up late and missed it.

建議: 回答が不明瞭で、意味が伝わりにくいです。日常生活で覚えるべき具体的なことを明確に述べ、簡潔に答える練習をしてください。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember important appointments and tasks, so I usually write them down or set reminders on my smartphone.

建議: 回答が不明瞭で、文法的な誤りが多いです。記憶方法を具体的に説明し、論理的に話を展開する練習をしましょう。

範例: I usually write important information on paper or save it on my smartphone to help me remember.

× Yes, I think are my I, I'm glad to memor to memorizing, for example, uh, the name of the person or the party state or what, what, uh, the price.

✓ Yes, I think I am good at memorizing, for example, the name of a person, the party state, or the price.

The original sentence has a confusing word order and redundant phrases, making it difficult to understand. The correction rearranges the sentence into a clear subject-verb-object structure and removes repeated words to improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, umm, when I already started high school student are I how did you get up, umm, at six for an important exams, but that they uh, I completely forget to uh, setting an alarm, so I failed to add to.

✓ Yes, when I had already started high school, I got up at six for an important exam, but I completely forgot to set an alarm, so I failed.

The original sentence mixes tenses and has incorrect verb forms. 'Started' should be in past perfect to indicate an action completed before another past action. 'Forget' should be past tense 'forgot'. 'Setting' should be the base form 'set' after 'forgot to'. The sentence is also restructured for clarity.

× I guess umm, of course it depends on the person, but uh, umm, taking or taking good norit or umm, putting uh on smartphone is very important.

✓ I guess, of course, it depends on the person, but taking good notes or putting them on a smartphone is very important.

The phrase 'taking good norit' is likely a mispronunciation of 'taking good notes'. Also, 'putting uh on smartphone' lacks an object; 'them' (referring to notes) is added for clarity. The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'smartphone'.

× Well, I often already. Umm, I'm actually allowed to umm, taking or or nor the AP nor the and put on my not on the paper and put on my smart screen on smartphone.

✓ Well, I often take notes. I'm actually allowed to take notes and put them on paper or on my smartphone screen.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases. 'Allowed to umm, taking' is incorrect; it should be 'allowed to take'. The sentence is restructured to clearly express the idea of taking notes and storing them on paper or smartphone.