记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“it's depends”应为“it depends”，“for worse or for tests”表达不清晰。建议你在回答时注意语法的正确性，并使用更自然的表达方式，同时避免重复和冗长。

範例: I think it depends on the type of information. For example, I'm good at memorising facts for tests, especially in subjects like history and geography. However, I find it harder to remember everyday details.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和口头语，使用连贯的句子结构。

範例: I rarely forget important things because I use tools like Google Calendar and Notion to remind me of important dates. These apps send notifications, which help me stay organised.

建議: 你的回答较为清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意时态一致性，如“forgot”应为“forget”。建议丰富细节，提升表达自然度。

範例: One important thing I need to remember daily is to take out the garbage. Sometimes, I get so busy with studying or working that I forget the trash collection day. Therefore, I always set a reminder on my phone to avoid missing it.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“screen desk”应为“home screen widget”。建议使用准确的词汇和完整的句子表达观点，避免重复。

範例: I usually use tools like Google Calendar or Notion to remember important things. Recently, I've been using Google Calendar more because it has a convenient widget on my phone's home screen, which makes it easy to check my schedule.

× Well I think it's depends on the things like for worse or for tests.

✓ Well I think it depends on the things like for worse or for tests.

这里的主语是第三人称单数it，谓语动词depend应该用第三人称单数形式depends，但句子中多了助动词is，导致语法错误。正确用法是it depends。

× But if the daily detail thing I might not very good at memorize that I.

✓ But if it's daily detailed things, I might not be very good at memorizing them.

这里的'daily detail thing'表达不准确，应该用复数形式'daily detailed things'，且动词短语'might not very good at memorize that I'结构混乱，需调整为'might not be very good at memorizing them'。

× Well, I really forget something important because I always use some tools to assist me to remember those important dates, such as Google Schedule or Notion, uh, through list apps I can, uh, it will notify me.

✓ Well, I rarely forget something important because I always use some tools to assist me to remember those important dates, such as Google Schedule or Notion. Through list apps, it will notify me.

原句中'really forget'用词不当，应为'rarely forget'表示很少忘记。句子结构较长且混乱，需拆分并调整时态和表达，使其更通顺。

× Sometimes I get so busy with studying or working then I forgot the trash collection day.

✓ Sometimes I get so busy with studying or working that I forget the trash collection day.

这里的'forgot'是过去式，但句子描述的是经常发生的情况，应使用一般现在时'forget'。此外，连接词用'that'更合适。

× Therefore, I always try to keep it in mind or set a reminder on my phone to avoid missing it.

✓ Therefore, I always try to keep it in mind or set a reminder on my phone to avoid missing it.

该句中介词使用正确，无需修改。

× Recently I use Google Schedule most often because I find out it can put a little tool on my screen desk, so my screen desk of the phone.

✓ Recently I use Google Schedule most often because I found out it can put a little tool on my phone's home screen.

'screen desk'不是正确表达，应使用'home screen'表示手机主屏幕。'find out'时态应与上下文一致，改为过去式'found out'。

× So it's very convenient to.

✓ So it's very convenient to use.

该句缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整。应补充动词'use'使句子完整。