记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve grammar by saying 'good at memorizing' instead of 'good in memorizing'. Also, make your sentences more concise and clear, for example, 'I prefer understanding concepts rather than memorizing facts.'

範例: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorizing things. I prefer to understand concepts deeply rather than just memorizing facts. That's why I chose economics for my graduation instead of humanities or history.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. For example, say 'I usually create a to-do list to avoid forgetting important things, especially when I travel.'

範例: Not really. I usually create a to-do list to avoid forgetting important things. For example, whenever I travel, I make a checklist of all necessary documents to ensure I don't forget anything important.

建議: Avoid repetition like 'I reach I reach' and use linking words to make your answer smoother. For example, 'I usually make a checklist when I arrive at the office, and in the evening, I review it to see what tasks are completed and what remains.'

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, especially my office tasks. I usually make a checklist when I arrive at the office, and in the evening, I review it to check which tasks are done and which are left.

建議: Try to avoid repeating the same phrases and improve sentence flow by using linking words. For example, 'I make a to-do list every morning to organize my office tasks, and in the evening, I review it to ensure everything is completed or rescheduled.'

範例: To remember important things, I make a to-do list every morning outlining my office tasks. Then, in the evening, I review the list to see if anything is left unfinished and reschedule it for the next day if needed.

× I'm not good in memorizing things.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. So, it should be 'good at memorizing things'. This is a common collocation in English.

× I prefer to learn the concept and understand it basic rather than just turning memorizing the facts.

✓ I prefer to learn the concept and understand it basically rather than just memorizing the facts.

The word 'basic' is an adjective, but here an adverb is needed to modify the verb 'understand'. The correct adverb form is 'basically'. Also, 'turning memorizing' is incorrect; it should be 'just memorizing'.

× this was uh, the reason why I selected economics as as a subject in my graduation rather than taking other subjects of humanities or history.

✓ this was, uh, the reason why I selected economics as a subject in my graduation rather than taking other subjects like humanities or history.

The phrase 'subjects of humanities or history' is incorrect; it should be 'subjects like humanities or history' to indicate examples. Also, 'as as' is a repetition error corrected to 'as a'.

× I believe in creating A to do list or a checklist for all important tasks.

✓ I believe in creating a to-do list or a checklist for all important tasks.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' as it is a compound noun.

× For example, whenever I go for travel, I make a checklist for the paper so I don't forget anything important.

✓ For example, whenever I go traveling, I make a checklist for the papers so I don't forget anything important.

The phrase 'go for travel' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go traveling'. Also, 'paper' should be plural 'papers' if referring to documents.

× So what I do, I usually make a checklist when I reach I reach the office and in the evening I again review it to see whatever is done and what is left.

✓ So what I do, I usually make a checklist when I reach the office and in the evening I again review it to see what is done and what is left.

The phrase 'I reach I reach' is a repetition error; one 'I reach' should be removed. Also, 'whatever is done' should be 'what is done' for correct usage.

× Well, to remember important things I always make A to do list or a checklist for the task.

✓ Well, to remember important things I always make a to-do list or a checklist for the task.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'.

× For example, every day in the morning I make A to do list for the task I need to perform in the office.

✓ For example, every day in the morning I make a to-do list for the tasks I need to perform in the office.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context.

× Then I try to complete all the tasks during the day and in the evening I again review it to see if anything is left and if it is, I make sure that next date.

✓ Then I try to complete all the tasks during the day and in the evening I again review it to see if anything is left, and if it is, I make sure to complete it the next day.

The phrase 'make sure that next date' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'make sure to complete it the next day' for clarity and correct sentence structure.