记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. For example, "when it comes to remember" should be "when it comes to remembering" and "one of the reason" should be "one of the reasons." Also, try to use linking words to improve coherence, such as "because" or "since."

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially when I have to remember a lot of information at once. Because of this, I chose engineering instead of medicine. Engineering requires creativity and problem-solving skills, whereas medicine demands memorising a large amount of information.

建議: Your answer is clear and provides a specific example, which is good. However, try to use more linking words to make the story flow better, such as "while going" or "so I had to." Also, avoid short, choppy sentences by combining related ideas.

範例: Yes, I once forgot my admit card during my 43rd BCS examination. While I was on my way to the exam center for the Bangladesh Affairs exam, I suddenly remembered that I had left it at home. So, I had to go back quickly and then hurried to the center again.

建議: Your answer covers the topic but contains some redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, "for example, for instance" is repetitive, and "complete my task efficient" should be "complete my tasks efficiently." Try to use clearer linking words and avoid repeating similar phrases.

範例: Nowadays, everyone needs to remember the credentials for their online accounts. For instance, I have many accounts related to my work, studies, and social media. Without remembering their passwords, I cannot access them or complete my tasks efficiently. Sometimes, I find it difficult to keep track of all these details.

建議: Your answer is relevant and provides specific details, but the sentence structure can be improved for naturalness. For example, "noting down them" should be "noting them down." Also, use linking words like "sometimes" and "especially" more smoothly to connect ideas.

範例: I remember important things by noting them down on my mobile phone, notebook, or laptop, especially when I'm at the office. I always keep a diary with me, and whenever something important happens, I write it down in my diary.

× this is one of the reason that I chose engineering instead of medicine

✓ this is one of the reasons that I chose engineering instead of medicine

The word 'reason' should be plural 'reasons' because it is preceded by 'one of the', which always requires a plural noun after it.

× when it comes to remember a lot of information at once

✓ when it comes to remembering a lot of information at once

After the phrase 'when it comes to', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'remember' should be 'remembering'.

× I started for my exam center and after going halfway, I suddenly remembered I left my admit card at my home

✓ I started for my exam center and after going halfway, I suddenly remembered I had left my admit card at my home

When referring to an action that happened before another past action, the past perfect tense 'had left' should be used instead of simple past 'left'.

× I started for my exam center

✓ I started to my exam center

The correct preposition to indicate movement towards a place is 'to', not 'for'. So, 'started for' should be 'started to'.

× I left my admit card at my home

✓ I left my admit card at home

The word 'home' does not require the possessive pronoun 'my' when used with 'at'. Saying 'at home' is correct.

× I remember the important things by noting down them on my mobile phone sometimes

✓ I remember the important things by noting them down on my mobile phone sometimes

The pronoun 'them' should come directly after the verb 'noting' and before 'down'. The phrase 'noting down them' is incorrect; it should be 'noting them down'.

× without remembering their passwords, I cannot access them or complete my task efficient

✓ without remembering their passwords, I cannot access them or complete my tasks efficiently

The word 'efficient' is an adjective but should be an adverb 'efficiently' to modify the verb 'complete'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context.