记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Votre réponse est naturelle mais contient des erreurs grammaticales et des hésitations qui affectent la fluidité. Essayez de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire, suivie d'exemples précis, et évitez les répétitions inutiles. Par exemple, utilisez des expressions comme "For instance" pour introduire des exemples.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, I can easily remember poems for school and the birthdays of my friends.

建議: Votre réponse est claire mais pourrait être améliorée en utilisant des temps verbaux corrects et en ajoutant des détails pour enrichir la réponse. Utilisez des mots de liaison comme "actually" ou "unfortunately" pour rendre la réponse plus naturelle.

範例: Actually, I once forgot my mom's birthday and unfortunately, I didn't even wish her on that day.

建議: Votre réponse est bien structurée mais un peu longue et répétitive. Essayez d'être plus concise et d'utiliser des expressions plus naturelles comme "I usually write things down in my diary or calendar to keep track of my plans."

範例: I usually write things down in my diary or calendar to keep track of my plans and appointments.

建議: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais manque de fluidité et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Utilisez des phrases plus simples et des mots de liaison comme "also" ou "in addition" pour améliorer la cohérence.

範例: I usually write down important information. Also, if it's for a school exam, I read it several times during the day to memorise it.

× I it's not so difficult for me to remember some poem for school or when the birthdays of my friends or something like this.

✓ It's not so difficult for me to remember some poems for school or when the birthdays of my friends are or something like this.

The original sentence contains a contraction error ('I it's') and lacks subject-verb agreement in the phrase 'the birthdays of my friends'. Also, 'some poem' should be plural 'some poems' to match the context. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yeah, once I forgot when my mom's birthday is, and I even forgot to say happy birthday to her.

✓ Yeah, once I forgot when my mom's birthday was, and I even forgot to say happy birthday to her.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the event happened in the past, 'is' should be changed to 'was' to maintain past tense consistency.

× To tell the truth, to remember something in my daily life, I usually need to write it down in my diary or calendar so I can check when I have some plans or anything, anytime.

✓ To tell the truth, to remember something in my daily life, I usually need to write it down in my diary or calendar so I can check when I have some plans or anything, at any time.

The phrase 'anytime' is informal and can be ambiguous. Using 'at any time' is more appropriate in formal contexts and clarifies the meaning.

× As I said earlier, I usually write down some information I need to remember and if this information I need for school for my exam, I read it during the day so I can learn it by heart.

✓ As I said earlier, I usually write down some information I need to remember, and if this information is for school or for my exam, I read it during the day so I can learn it by heart.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunction and verb in the conditional clause, making it confusing. Adding 'is' and proper conjunctions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.