记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding hesitations and redundant phrases. Use clear topic sentences and linking words to improve coherence. For example, start directly with your ability and then give specific examples.

範例: I am quite good at memorising things that interest me, such as video games and technology. However, I sometimes struggle to remember information from certain lessons because they don't capture my attention as much.

建議: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, during the coronavirus pandemic, I missed an important quiz because I forgot to participate in it, which affected my studies.

建議: Make your answer more fluent by reducing hesitations and using linking words. Be specific and clear about what you need to remember daily.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember several things. For example, I have to follow a timetable to take my pills on time, and I also need to remember my gym schedule because sometimes I forget to go due to being busy.

建議: Try to speak more smoothly and avoid filler words. Use clear sentences and linking words to explain your methods logically.

範例: When I want to remember something important, I usually write it down on a piece of paper and stick it on the refrigerator. Additionally, I set alarms on my phone to remind me at the right time.

× It depends on what title, uh, which I like to which I want to memorize.

✓ It depends on the title that I like and want to memorize.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'which' as a relative pronoun in a way that disrupts the sentence structure. Replacing 'which' with 'that' and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the pronoun usage.

× something which related to technology

✓ something which is related to technology

The phrase lacks the verb 'is' to correctly link 'something' and 'related to technology'. Adding 'is' corrects the sentence structure and prepositional usage.

× my memory can't uh, work well actually.

✓ my memory can't work well, actually.

The filler 'uh' interrupts the sentence unnecessarily. Removing it improves clarity and flow without changing meaning.

× Yes, there are.

✓ Yes, I have.

The question asks if the student has ever forgotten something important, so the correct response is 'Yes, I have.' 'There are' is incorrect because it does not answer the question about personal experience.

× but which which? The most important of that was about quiz, which which happened in coronavirus duration

✓ but the most important was a quiz that happened during the coronavirus period

The repeated 'which which' is incorrect and confusing. Replacing it with 'that' and restructuring the sentence clarifies meaning and corrects pronoun misuse.

× and I have 4. I had forgotten to participate in one of my most important exams.

✓ and I had forgotten to participate in one of my most important exams.

The phrase 'I have 4' is unclear and likely incorrect. The past perfect 'had forgotten' is appropriate here to indicate an action completed before another past event.

× There are several other things which I have to remember on my daily life.

✓ There are several things I have to remember in my daily life.

The correct preposition with 'daily life' is 'in' not 'on'. Removing 'other' also improves clarity unless contrasting with previously mentioned things.

× sometimes I I forgot to go to gym because of my business.

✓ sometimes I forget to go to the gym because of my business.

The present tense 'forget' fits better with 'sometimes' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'the gym' requires the definite article.

× sometimes I I forgot to go to gym because of my business.

✓ sometimes I forget to go to the gym because of my business.

The noun 'gym' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place regularly attended.

× another thing which helped me to remember. Thing is, uh, make it alarm on my phone to remember, to, uh, Remember Me, to remind me.

✓ another thing that helps me remember is setting an alarm on my phone to remind me.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses 'which' incorrectly. Rephrasing to a complete sentence with correct pronouns and verb forms improves clarity and correctness.