记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais contient des erreurs grammaticales et des phrases maladroites. Essayez d'utiliser des structures plus naturelles et évitez les répétitions. Par exemple, utilisez le présent simple correctement et améliorez la fluidité de la phrase.

範例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things, especially pleasant memories that impress me. For instance, I still remember traveling to Tokyo with my family when I was a child.

建議: Votre réponse manque de clarté et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Utilisez des temps verbaux corrects et structurez votre réponse avec des phrases plus simples et cohérentes. Ajoutez des mots de liaison pour améliorer la fluidité.

範例: Yes, I often forget my friends' birthdays because I am not good at remembering numbers. Although I remember the memories, recalling dates is difficult for me.

建議: Votre réponse est un peu confuse et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Essayez d'utiliser des phrases plus claires et évitez les erreurs de vocabulaire. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre la réponse plus cohérente.

範例: In my daily life, especially at work, I need to remember many things. For example, I always check my calendar to remind me of meeting times and my daily schedule. This helps me avoid forgetting important tasks and improves my work efficiency.

建議: Votre réponse contient plusieurs erreurs grammaticales et manque de clarté. Utilisez des phrases complètes et correctes, et expliquez clairement vos méthodes avec des exemples précis. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour améliorer la cohérence.

範例: I always use a calendar and check it every day. I believe this is an effective way to avoid forgetting important things. For example, at work, I set deadlines and timelines to keep myself organized.

× Yes, I'm good at memorizing things, especially the good memories or something impress me.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing things, especially good memories or something that impresses me.

The verb 'impress' needs to be in the third person singular present tense 'impresses' to agree with the singular subject 'something'. Also, 'the good memories' should be 'good memories' without 'the' for general meaning.

× For example, I'm still remember that when I was a child I was traveled with my family to Tokyo.

✓ For example, I still remember that when I was a child I traveled with my family to Tokyo.

The phrase 'I'm still remember' is incorrect; it should be 'I still remember' because 'remember' is a simple present verb here. Also, 'was traveled' is incorrect passive form; it should be the simple past active 'traveled'.

× Yes, I often forgotten my friend's birthday, although I could.

✓ Yes, I often forget my friend's birthday, although I could.

'Forgotten' is the past participle and cannot be used alone without an auxiliary verb. The correct simple present tense 'forget' fits better here to express habitual action.

× I remember the memories, but I'm not good at remember numbers, so sometimes I will forget someone's birthday.

✓ I remember the memories, but I'm not good at remembering numbers, so sometimes I forget someone's birthday.

After 'good at', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'remember' should be 'remembering'. Also, 'will forget' is changed to 'forget' to express habitual action.

× It is very difficult to me to remember numbers.

✓ It is very difficult for me to remember numbers.

The correct preposition after 'difficult' in this context is 'for', not 'to'.

× For example, I will always check my calendar to remind me what time for the meeting or the daylight schedule.

✓ For example, I always check my calendar to remind me of the meeting time or the daylight schedule.

The verb 'remind' requires the preposition 'of' before the object. Also, 'what time for the meeting' is awkward; 'the meeting time' is clearer.

× It helps me to avoid forgotten something and make my work more.

✓ It helps me to avoid forgetting something and make my work better.

'Forgotten' is a past participle and cannot be used after 'avoid'; the gerund 'forgetting' is correct. Also, 'make my work more' is incomplete; 'make my work better' is appropriate.

× I think it's a eventual way to avoid forgotten some important things.

✓ I think it's an effective way to avoid forgetting some important things.

'Eventual' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'effective'. Also, 'forgotten' should be 'forgetting' as a gerund after 'avoid'.

× For example, I work I always set up a deadline time timeline to avoid me.

✓ For example, at work I always set up a deadline timeline to help me avoid mistakes.

The sentence is unclear and incomplete. 'I work I always' is incorrect; it should be 'at work I always'. 'Deadline time timeline' is redundant; 'deadline timeline' suffices. 'To avoid me' is incorrect; it should specify what is avoided, e.g., 'to help me avoid mistakes'.