记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，且有重复和语法错误。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和语法。

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. I often use repetition to help me remember important information, and I find that this method works well for me.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议使用正确的时态，简洁表达经历，并补充细节使内容更具体。

範例: Yes, I once forgot my passport at the airport, which was a big problem because I couldn't board the plane. Fortunately, my family helped me to get a replacement passport in time.

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺乏连贯性和具体细节。建议组织好句子，使用连接词，并具体说明日常需要记住的事情。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember to feed my children and pets because they depend on me. Also, I help my mother clean the house regularly to keep our home tidy.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地描述记忆方法，使用连贯的句子和适当的连接词。

範例: I remember important things by repeating them silently in my mind several times. This helps me to focus and retain the information better.

× Yeah, I try to my best to memorize things because when I was trying to memorize things, memory, do memory things, I just feels like I can take the best things stay with me.

✓ Yeah, I try my best to memorize things because when I was trying to memorize things, memory, do memory things, I just feel like I can take the best things to stay with me.

这里的动词feel后面应该用原形feel而不是第三人称单数形式feels，因为主语是I，不是第三人称单数。

× I did forgot I, I do have forgot something important like I used to forgot my passport on the airport and then I can go, go aboard.

✓ I did forget, I do have forgotten something important like I used to forget my passport at the airport and then I couldn't go abroad.

动词forget的过去式是forgot，过去分词是forgotten。这里用did后面应该用动词原形forget，而不是forgot。used to后面也应该用动词原形forget。airport前用介词at。go aboard应为go abroad。

× I used to forgot my passport on the airport and then I can go, go aboard.

✓ I used to forget my passport at the airport and then I couldn't go abroad.

介词on the airport不正确，正确用法是at the airport。go aboard意思是登船，应该用go abroad表示出国。

× But in the end, I just solve it because I, my family was, uh, help me to get the passport.

✓ But in the end, I just solved it because my family helped me to get the passport.

这里描述过去发生的事情，动词应该用过去式。solve应改为solved，help应改为helped。

× Remember that life, I should remember something that is like feed my kids and feed my dogs.

✓ In life, I should remember things like feeding my kids and feeding my dogs.

句子结构不清晰，应该用介词短语In life开头，feed后面用动名词feeding表示动作。

× Uh, they are my family, so I should feed them mom.

✓ Uh, they are my family, so I should feed them, Mom.

这里的mom是称呼，应该大写并用逗号隔开。

× Then, uh, take, take the clean of the house, help my mother clean the house and don't forget to take the.

✓ Then, uh, clean the house, help my mother clean the house and don't forget to take care of it.

take the clean of the house不正确，应该用clean the house或者take care of the house。句子不完整，补充完整。

× I just repeat again and again in my mind and I like something appear in my mind and I said OK this is something important then maybe I should just trying to repeat it again, like don't tell anyone about this.

✓ I just repeat again and again in my mind and I like something appears in my mind and I say OK this is something important then maybe I should just try to repeat it again, like don't tell anyone about this.

动词appear主语是something，第三人称单数，动词用appears。I said改为现在时I say。should后面用动词原形try，不用trying。