记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni uttor e kichu bhul grammar o vocabulary use korechen, ar kichu sentence onek boro hoyeche. Apnar uttor ke aro natural o sohoje bujha jabe jodi apni sentence gulo ke chhoto rakhun ebong shothik grammar babohar korun. Apni 'memorizing thing' er bodole 'memorizing things' bolte paren, ebong 'every small details' er bodole 'every small detail' use korun. Apnar uttor e linking words babohar korle uttor ta aro bhalo hobe.

範例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. I usually remember small details about my day or the people I talk to. I am a good listener, so I pay close attention to what everyone says.

建議: Apnar uttor e grammar o sentence structure e onek bhul ache. Apni uttor ke aro spostho o sohoje bujha jabe emon vabe bolte paren. Linking words babohar kore uttor ke logical rakhun. Apni 'forgetful' er bodole 'forget' use korun, ar 'in last night' er bodole 'last night' bolun.

範例: Yes, sometimes I forget important things. For example, last night I forgot which subject my exam was for the next day, and I also forgot the topic I had studied earlier.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu sentence onek confused o incomplete mone hocche. Apni uttor ke spostho o sohoje bujha jabe emon vabe bolte paren. Linking words babohar kore uttor ke logical rakhun. Apni 'where's the occasion and the person' er bodole 'the dates of occasions and important people' bolte paren. Apnar uttor e kichu grammar o vocabulary improve kora dorkar.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember important dates, such as occasions and birthdays of people. Sometimes, I also remember words that hurt me or make me happy. These memories are important because they are part of my life.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar o vocabulary bhul ache. Apni uttor ke aro spostho o natural vabe bolte paren. Linking words babohar kore uttor ke logical rakhun. Apni 'memories thing' er bodole 'memorizing things' bolun, ar 'save to my phone' er bodole 'save it on my phone' bolun.

範例: I am good at memorizing things, but if I forget something, I save it on my phone or calendar so it can remind me. Sometimes, I also write a list in my diary about my daily routine.

× Yes, I'm good at memorizing thing.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing things.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items or details that are memorized. In English, when talking about general or multiple items, the plural form is used.

× I memorized every small details about my day or a person who talked to me.

✓ I memorized every small detail about my day or a person who talked to me.

The phrase 'every small details' is incorrect because 'every' is followed by a singular noun. Therefore, 'details' should be singular 'detail'.

× I remember every small thing in I am a good listener so I listen very carefully everything everyone saying to me.

✓ I remember every small thing. I am a good listener, so I listen very carefully to everything everyone says to me.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper structure. It should be split into two sentences. Also, 'everyone saying' should be 'everyone says' to maintain subject-verb agreement and correct tense. The preposition 'to' is needed before 'everything'.

× Yes I also sometimes forgetful like umm as example I have one exam and and next day but in last night I forget which subject exam is that and I also forget the topic I study earlier.

✓ Yes, I am also sometimes forgetful. For example, I have an exam the next day, but last night I forgot which subject the exam was for, and I also forgot the topic I studied earlier.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' after 'I' to form 'I am forgetful'. 'Forgetful' is an adjective and needs a linking verb. The past tense 'forgot' is required for actions that happened in the past. Also, articles like 'an' before 'exam' and proper word order are necessary.

× And my daily life, umm, we sometimes need to remember the dates, where's the occasion and the person.

✓ In my daily life, we sometimes need to remember the dates, the occasion, and the person.

The phrase 'And my daily life' is incorrect; 'In my daily life' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'where's the occasion' is incorrect; it should be 'the occasion' to match the list.

× Sometimes the there were some words which hurt us more.

✓ Sometimes there are some words which hurt us more.

The phrase 'the there were' is incorrect. The correct form is 'there are' to indicate existence in present tense. Also, 'sometimes' suggests present tense, so 'are' is appropriate.

× We remember these details or which makes us happy.

✓ We remember these details, which make us happy.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Which make us happy' refers to 'details' (plural), so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. The conjunction 'or' is incorrect here.

× The things we remember these old things because it's a part of our life.

✓ The things we remember are old things because they are a part of our life.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing. Adding 'are' after 'remember' completes the sentence. Also, 'it's' (it is) should be 'they are' to agree with the plural subject 'things'.

× I'm good at memories thing, but by chance if I forget something I I save to my phone or save to my calendar for the occasion so it can remind me of that specific thing.

✓ I'm good at memorizing things, but if by chance I forget something, I save it to my phone or my calendar for the occasion so it can remind me of that specific thing.

'Memories thing' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'memorizing things'. Also, 'save to my phone' needs the object 'it' to clarify what is saved. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Or sometimes I list in a diary of my daily upcoming routine.

✓ Or sometimes I list my daily upcoming routine in a diary.

The verb 'list' requires a direct object, so 'my daily upcoming routine' should follow it. The prepositional phrase 'in a diary' should come after the object for correct word order.