记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating 'things' and improve grammar by using plural forms correctly. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things, especially numbers. For example, I often forget my mother's phone number and her birthday. I think numbers don't stick in my memory as easily as other types of information.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid repeating words. Also, complete your sentences fully to convey your feelings clearly.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important occasions like family birthdays. For instance, once I forgot my mother's birthday, and she had to remind me. I felt very upset and sorry about that.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, correct prepositions for better accuracy.

範例: I need to remember my daily tasks because I have monthly targets to achieve. Therefore, it's important to keep track of my work so that I can stay organised and meet deadlines on time.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but contains some repetition and minor errors. Try to avoid repeating words and clarify phrases like 'protein thing'. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: I usually write important things down in my Apple Notes so I can check them daily and remind myself of my tasks. Additionally, I add important reminders in WeChat and pin them to the top for easy access.

× I often forgot my mother's phone number and the birthday date.

✓ I often forget my mother's phone number and the birthday date.

The sentence is describing a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used instead of the past tense 'forgot'.

× I think it's because number don't stick in my memory as easily as other people do.

✓ I think it's because numbers don't stick in my memory as easily as other people do.

The noun 'number' should be plural 'numbers' to agree with the plural verb 'don't'.

× Well, I have forgotten some special occasions about family's birthday.

✓ Well, I have forgotten some special occasions like family birthdays.

The phrase 'about family's birthday' is awkward and incorrect. 'Family birthdays' is the correct plural form and fits the context better.

× once I forgot my mother's birthday and my mom had to contact contact me to remind me and that time I feel upset, upset and about my.

✓ Once I forgot my mother's birthday and my mom had to contact me to remind me, and at that time I felt upset about it.

The verb 'feel' should be in past tense 'felt' to match the past context. Also, 'contact contact me' is a repetition error and 'about my' is incomplete; corrected to 'about it' for clarity.

× So it's important to keep track on my daily work and it's so that I can stay organized and meet my deadlines on time.

✓ So it's important to keep track of my daily work so that I can stay organized and meet my deadlines on time.

The correct preposition after 'keep track' is 'of', not 'on'. Also, 'and it's so that' is redundant; 'so that' alone is sufficient.

× Well I often write it down in my Apple notes to remember important things and so that I can check it every day to to remind me what I have to do in my daily work.

✓ Well, I often write them down in my Apple Notes to remember important things so that I can check them every day to remind me what I have to do in my daily work.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to multiple 'important things', so 'them' is correct. Also, 'Apple Notes' is a proper noun and should be capitalized.

× And another way to remember protein thing is I will add it in my WeChat and pin it top.

✓ And another way to remember important things is I will add them in my WeChat and pin them to the top.

'Protein thing' is likely a typo for 'important things'. Also, 'pin it top' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'pin them to the top'.