记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如"a very good at memory things"应为"very good at memorising things"。句子结构不够自然，且表达略显冗长。建议简化句子结构，注意动词形式和介词使用，使表达更地道。

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I need to pass a test or memorise a long text, I usually spend a lot of time repeating it and making notes to help me remember better.

建議: 回答内容具体且连贯，但句子较长，缺少适当的连接词。建议使用连接词如"so"、"which"等，使句子更流畅，同时注意标点符号的使用。

範例: Once, I planned to go to the airport in the morning to catch my flight, but I forgot my ID card, so I couldn't board the plane and missed my flight, which was really frustrating and stressful.

建議: 回答内容较好，但存在单复数和冠词使用错误，如"market price"应为"market prices"，"making informed decision"应为"making informed decisions"。建议注意名词的单复数和冠词的正确使用。

範例: As an operations manager, I need to keep track of market prices and customer information because these details are crucial for making informed decisions and maintaining good relationships with clients.

× Actually I'm not a very good at memory things.

✓ Actually, I'm not very good at memorizing things.

这里“a very good”用法错误，形容词good前不应加不定冠词a，且“memory things”表达不准确，应使用动名词形式“memorizing things”表示记忆的动作。

× For example, when I have to pass a test or memorizing a long text, I usually spend a lot of time repeating it and making note to help me remember better.

✓ For example, when I have to pass a test or memorize a long text, I usually spend a lot of time repeating it and making notes to help me remember better.

在并列结构中，动词应保持一致，不能一个用不定式（to pass），另一个用动名词（memorizing），应改为不定式“memorize”。另外，“making note”应为复数“making notes”，表示做笔记。

× Once I planned to go to the airport in the morning to catch my flight but I forgot my ID card so I couldn't board my plane and missed my flight which was really frustrating and stressful.

✓ Once I planned to go to the airport in the morning to catch my flight, but I forgot my ID card, so I couldn't board my plane and missed my flight, which was really frustrating and stressful.

此句主要是标点符号问题，语法时态正确。建议加逗号使句子更清晰。

× As an operation manager, I need to keep track of market price and customer information because these details are crucial for making informed decision and maintaining good relationship with the client.

✓ As an operation manager, I need to keep track of market prices and customer information because these details are crucial for making informed decisions and maintaining good relationships with clients.

“market price”应为复数“market prices”，“decision”应为复数“decisions”，“relationship”应为复数“relationships”，“the client”应改为复数“clients”，因为前文用的是复数“details”，且表达更通顺。