记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều từ ngữ không cần thiết như "umm" và "add" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget tasks I need to do. My friends even joke that I have a memory like a goldfish.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "umm" để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I once forgot the exact time my sister returned to my country because we were living abroad. However, I made sure to check my mother's schedule carefully to avoid any mistakes.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "what time did I do". Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

範例: I need to remember deadlines for my homework and exams because I'm a senior student. Therefore, I plan my study time carefully to complete all my assignments on time.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp như "to don't forget". Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc đúng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I usually make a plan and take notes on my phone so that I can check them anytime when I'm outside and not forget anything.

× No, honestly, I don't think that I could add, memorize or umm, remember something because there are several times I forgot umm, what I have to do.

✓ No, honestly, I don't think that I can add, memorize, or umm, remember something because there have been several times I forgot umm, what I had to do.

The modal verb 'could' is incorrectly used here; 'can' fits better to express ability in present/future. Also, 'there are several times' should be 'there have been several times' to indicate past occurrences relevant to the present. 'What I have to do' should be 'what I had to do' to maintain past tense consistency.

× And people also call me like a goldfish because I forgot everything that they mentioned before.

✓ And people also call me a goldfish because I forget everything that they mentioned before.

The phrase 'call me like a goldfish' is incorrect; it should be 'call me a goldfish'. Also, 'forgot' should be 'forget' to indicate a habitual action. 'Mentioned before' is acceptable as past reference.

× Yes, absolutely I have forgotten the time that my sister I come back to my country because we are umm, go abroad.

✓ Yes, absolutely I have forgotten the time that my sister came back to my country because we went abroad.

The phrase 'my sister I come back' is ungrammatical; it should be 'my sister came back'. 'We are umm, go abroad' should be 'we went abroad' to correctly use past tense.

× But however umm, my mother's uh, asked me for checking her schedule and I can umm, don't make any mistake.

✓ But however, my mother asked me to check her schedule and I can umm, not make any mistake.

'My mother's uh, asked me for checking' is incorrect; it should be 'my mother asked me to check'. 'I can umm, don't make any mistake' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I can umm, not make any mistake' or better 'I can umm, avoid making any mistakes'.

× Absolutely, it's my deadline of homework and also exam because I'm a senior right now and there are a lot of homework out waiting for me to complete so that's why I need to make a plan of what time did I do and finish umm homework every day.

✓ Absolutely, it's my homework deadlines and also exams because I'm a senior right now and there is a lot of homework waiting for me to complete so that's why I need to make a plan of when I do and finish umm homework every day.

'Deadline of homework and also exam' should be pluralized to 'homework deadlines and also exams' to match the plural context. 'There are a lot of homework' is incorrect; 'homework' is uncountable, so 'there is a lot of homework' is correct. 'What time did I do and finish' is incorrect word order; it should be 'when I do and finish'.

× I always make a plan for it and also take note in my phone so that's when I go outside I can check it on my phone instantly and to don't forget anything.

✓ I always make a plan for it and also take notes on my phone so that when I go outside, I can check it on my phone instantly and not forget anything.

'Take note in my phone' should be 'take notes on my phone'. 'So that's when I go outside I can check' needs a conjunction: 'so that when I go outside, I can check'. 'To don't forget anything' is incorrect; it should be 'not forget anything'.