记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如'memories things'应为'memorising things'，句子结构不完整。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达原因。

範例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I am currently studying law, which requires me to remember many provisions from different areas such as private law and procedural law.

建議: 回答内容较好，但存在拼写错误，如'upsetted'应为'upset'，'shamed'应为'shamed'。建议注意时态和词形变化，表达更准确。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important recently. For example, last week I forgot my best friend's birthday, which upset her deeply. After that, I felt very ashamed and guilty.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，如'I am study law'应为'I am studying law'，句子未结束。建议完整表达观点，使用正确语法，并补充具体记忆方法。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember various legal provisions because I am studying law. Fortunately, I find it easy to remember them by using practical techniques such as making notes and repeating key points.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如'reputation'应为'repetition'，句子结构混乱。建议使用正确词汇，简洁明了地说明记忆方法。

範例: I usually remember important things by using practical tactics such as repetition and making notes. For example, since I am studying law, these methods help me memorize many legal provisions effectively.

× Yes, I'm really good at memories things I'm studying law now and I it is essential for me to remember lots of provision of different laws such as the private law or procedure laws.

✓ Yes, I'm really good at memorising things. I'm studying law now and it is essential for me to remember lots of provisions of different laws such as private law or procedural laws.

动词后面接动名词形式，memories应改为memorising。句子中存在断句问题，需分开。provision应为复数形式provisions，private law和procedure laws前不需要冠词，procedure应为形容词形式procedural。

× Yes, I have forgotten something important recently. For example, last week I just forgot the birthday of my best friend, which upsetted her deeply.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important recently. For example, last week I just forgot the birthday of my best friend, which upset her deeply.

动词upset的过去式和过去分词形式与原形相同，不能加-ed。

× After that, I felt extremely shamed and guilty.

✓ After that, I felt extremely ashamed and guilty.

shamed是形容词，表示“感到羞辱的”，而ashamed表示“感到羞愧的”，此处应使用ashamed。

× For me, it is essential to remember the diverse provision of different laws because I am study law now, for example, the private law and the procedural law.

✓ For me, it is essential to remember the diverse provisions of different laws because I am studying law now, for example, private law and procedural law.

动词study应使用现在进行时studying。provision应为复数provisions。private law和procedural law前不需要冠词。

× I often remember important thing by practical tactics such as reputation and making notes.

✓ I often remember important things by practical tactics such as repetition and making notes.

thing应为复数things。reputation应为repetition，意为重复记忆，更符合语境。

× For example, I'm studying law now and is it essential for me to remember lots of provisions of different laws and by reputation and making notes it is easy for me to remember these items?

✓ For example, I'm studying law now and it is essential for me to remember lots of provisions of different laws. By repetition and making notes, it is easy for me to remember these items.

句子结构混乱，is it essential应改为it is essential。reputation应为repetition。句子应分开，避免疑问句形式。