记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy and avoid redundancy. Use correct prepositions and plural forms, and limit the answer to 3-4 sentences. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and supporting details with linking words.

範例: No, I am not good at memorising things. Since childhood, I have struggled with subjects like history and geography that require a lot of memorisation. Because of this, I often found it difficult to keep up in those classes.

建議: Focus on clarity and grammatical correctness. Avoid repetition and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, try to be more specific about what you forgot and how it has improved.

範例: Yes, I used to forget many important things, especially during critical moments. However, this has improved over time, and now I rarely forget crucial tasks.

建議: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear topic sentence and complete your thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about what you need to remember.

範例: Currently, I don't have many important things to remember daily because I work from home and perform routine tasks. However, when I plan vacations or special events, I need to remember many details.

建議: Reduce hesitation and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Be concise and clear about your method of remembering important things.

範例: Like most people, I make notes of important tasks on my mobile phone. Before doing anything crucial, I check my list carefully to ensure I have completed all necessary steps.

× No, I'm not good in memorizing thing.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the general statement.

× No, I'm not good in memorizing thing.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' because the speaker refers to memorizing multiple items, not just one.

× From childhood I had hard time memorizing stuff.

✓ From childhood, I had a hard time memorizing stuff.

The phrase 'had hard time' is missing the article 'a'. The correct expression is 'had a hard time'.

× That's why I wasn't good in lot of subjects which required memorizing like history, geography and other other subjects.

✓ That's why I wasn't good at a lot of subjects which required memorizing like history, geography and other subjects.

The correct preposition with 'good' is 'at', not 'in'. Also, 'lot' needs the article 'a' to become 'a lot'. The repeated word 'other' is corrected to a single 'other'.

× Yeah, I do tend to forget a lot of things which are which, which are important in that situation.

✓ Yeah, I do tend to forget a lot of things which are important in that situation.

The phrase 'which are which' is redundant and incorrect; it should be simplified to 'which are'.

× It it has reduced now, but from childhood I forget a lot of crucial things in very crucial movement, but now it have reduced.

✓ It has reduced now, but from childhood I used to forget a lot of crucial things at very crucial moments; now it has reduced.

The phrase 'It it has' has a repeated word. 'I forget' should be past habitual 'I used to forget' to indicate past repeated action. 'Movement' should be plural 'moments'. 'It have reduced' should be 'it has reduced' for subject-verb agreement.

× As of now, there is no, not anything crucial that I have to remember in my daily life, uh, because, uh, I'm currently working from home and, uh, I have to do basic regular task on daily basis.

✓ As of now, there is nothing crucial that I have to remember in my daily life, because I'm currently working from home and I have to do basic regular tasks on a daily basis.

The phrase 'no, not anything' is redundant; 'nothing' is correct. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'basic regular'. 'On daily basis' needs the article 'a' to become 'on a daily basis'.

× So I don't have much to remember, but uh, going on vacations or planning something during.

✓ So I don't have much to remember, but when going on vacations or planning something, I do need to remember things.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or clause after 'during'. The correction completes the thought for clarity.

× Uh, like every person, I try to make notes of all the important things, uh, in my mobile and before, uh, going for that, uh, crucial thing, I'll make I'm tick, mark every tick, make sure that I've done everything that is mentioned in my mobile before doing that.

✓ Like everyone, I try to make notes of all the important things on my mobile, and before going to that crucial event, I tick off every item to make sure I've done everything mentioned on my mobile before doing it.

The phrase 'in my mobile' should be 'on my mobile'. 'Going for that' is better as 'going to that'. The phrase 'I'll make I'm tick, mark every tick' is unclear and corrected to 'I tick off every item'. Also, 'mentioned in my mobile' should be 'mentioned on my mobile'.