记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and redundancies. Try to give a clear and concise response with a topic sentence and supporting details using correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. I usually use techniques like repetition and getting used to the information to help me remember better.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and explain the situation logically using linking words. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to make your answer understandable.

範例: Yes, I once forgot my close friend's birthday. Fortunately, another friend reminded me, so I was able to remember and attend the celebration.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember meeting schedules and appointments because they help me manage my time effectively. Additionally, I try to recall what I learned each day to improve my knowledge.

建議: Your answer has good content but is repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Use clear sentences and linking words to explain your method of remembering important things. Avoid repeating words and improve sentence flow.

範例: When I have something important, I take notes on my phone and set reminders. This way, my phone alerts me at the right time, so I don't forget anything important.

× Yes, I got the I quite I quite good.

✓ Yes, I am quite good at it.

The original sentence has repeated words and incorrect structure. 'Got' is not appropriate here; 'am' is the correct verb to describe ability. Also, 'quite good' should be used as an adjective phrase describing ability.

× It is good.

✓ It is good.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no change.

× It is memorizing B by techniques technical like repetition and accustomation.

✓ I memorize by using techniques like repetition and habituation.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and word choice. 'Memorizing B' is unclear; 'techniques technical' is incorrect; 'accustomation' is not the correct word, 'habituation' or 'practice' is better. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I have uh, uh Isami this time in my friend close friends but birthday, but I thought I have to forgotten so my another friend remind me so I I have remember and I go to uh this.

✓ Yes, I forgot my close friend's birthday this time, but another friend reminded me, so I remembered and went to the celebration.

The original sentence is confusing and has tense errors. 'I have to forgotten' is incorrect; past tense 'forgot' is appropriate. 'Remind' should be past tense 'reminded'. 'I have remember' should be 'I remembered'. 'I go to' should be 'I went to'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper past tense usage.

× In everyday life, I need to remember the meeting schedule and appointment and it's help me overnight and manage my time effectively.

✓ In everyday life, I need to remember meeting schedules and appointments; they help me organize and manage my time effectively.

'The meeting schedule and appointment' should be plural to indicate multiple events. 'It's help me overnight' is unclear and incorrect; likely intended 'help me organize'. The sentence is corrected for plural forms and clarity.

× Moreover, I need to remember what I learned today every day because it's because it's helped me improve.

✓ Moreover, I need to remember what I learn every day because it helps me improve.

The sentence has redundancy ('because it's because it's') and tense inconsistency. 'Learned today every day' is contradictory; present tense 'learn' fits better for daily learning. 'Helped' should be present tense 'helps' to match ongoing improvement.

× When when I have a special special things, I will take note in my phone and I let my phone read my remind me when I when this time happen and it's make me don't have a forward anything important.

✓ When I have special things, I take notes on my phone and set reminders to alert me when the time comes, so I don't forget anything important.

The original sentence has repeated words, incorrect verb forms, and awkward phrasing. 'Take note in my phone' should be 'take notes on my phone'. 'I let my phone read my remind me' is incorrect; 'set reminders' is appropriate. 'When this time happen' should be 'when the time comes'. 'It's make me don't have a forward anything important' is incorrect; corrected to 'so I don't forget anything important'.