记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, and provide specific supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer logical and natural.

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget details quickly. For example, I often have to write notes to help me remember important information.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a full sentence that directly answers the question, and explain how you manage to remember important things with specific details.

範例: I have rarely forgotten something important because I usually write down important tasks or appointments in my planner to remind myself.

建議: Your answer is somewhat relevant but lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid vague phrases like 'various analogies' and use linking words to connect your ideas. Provide specific examples of what you need to remember.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my work tasks and to continue learning English. For example, I set reminders to practice vocabulary every day.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains filler words. Try to give a clear and complete response, explaining your methods to remember important things with specific details and linking words.

範例: I usually use my phone or write notes on paper to remember important things. For instance, I set alarms on my phone for appointments and write to-do lists to keep track of tasks.

× I'm not sure about that because I think it's due to, uh, short wise.

✓ I'm not sure about that because I think it's due to, uh, short memory.

The phrase 'short wise' is incorrect; the correct adjective to describe memory capacity is 'short memory'. Using the correct adjective improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Let me. Bad at memory things.

✓ Let me explain. I'm bad at remembering things.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a clear subject and verb. Reconstructing it into a complete sentence with subject and verb improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× You know what is all obvious? A piece of.

✓ You know, it's obvious, a piece of...

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding appropriate words and punctuation helps convey the intended meaning more clearly.

× No, I. I'm not probably forget important thing.

✓ No, I probably don't forget important things.

The modal verb 'probably' is misplaced and the verb form is incorrect. The correct structure is 'probably don't forget' to express likelihood in the present tense.

× If The thing is important for me, I I can write them in the.

✓ If the thing is important to me, I can write it down.

The pronoun 'them' is plural but refers to 'thing' which is singular. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'down' completes the phrasal verb 'write down'. Correct pronoun agreement and completing the phrase improve grammatical accuracy.

× Oh, I think I need something to remember in my daily life.

✓ Oh, I think I need to remember some things in my daily life.

The phrase 'need something to remember' is awkward. The correct expression is 'need to remember some things' to indicate multiple items to recall daily.

× I need to continue learning English and for various analogies.

✓ I need to continue learning English and various analogies.

The preposition 'for' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. Removing it makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I usually use my phone or paper, uh, I will write important thing done in my phone, uh, about test.

✓ I usually use my phone or paper; I write important things on my phone, like about tests.

'Important thing' should be plural 'important things' to match the context. Also, 'done' is incorrect here and should be omitted. Correct pluralization and verb usage improve clarity.

× I will write them down on my paper and I will.

✓ I will write them down on my paper.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Removing the incomplete part results in a complete and grammatically correct sentence.